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for Beautiful Souls

by BrethlessM

person cjflutterbye
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was fun!
Yup, I need to be on the list. I'm looking forward to their future!
person PJ
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaww!!! Nice way to wrap up this story this last chapter was real sweet. I will keep an eye out for the one shots and the sequel as well.
person New Fan
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great ending to a great story. Looking forward to the one-shot and the sequel.
person Catz2.0
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been addicted to your fanfic for a long time but hadn't found the time to review because I was so interested on going to the next chapter! I think that you must have put a lot of work into creating the story line and I think that it was TOTALLY worth it! I'm soooo glad that there's is another chapter coming up otherwise I would have died! I hope after this one is finished that you start up another fanfic that's just as good as this one! I can't say just how much I LOVE your story! Please update soon, I'm dying here! Hmmm... (What will Kagome and Inuyasha name their child?)
person skywolf
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW I found the link to this from your friends page off Deviant art and this fan fiction is great :D
Please update soon I want to know about the babies :D
person kirara1
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB ON THIS STORY. I WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE THE OTHER CHAPTERS. I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE FINAL ONE. YOU KEEP UP THE GREAT AND EXCELLENT JOB. HOPE TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK.
person Inuzands
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always! And I loved your description of evil. You made is so that I could actually see and smell and taste what evil is and why we fear it. I'm sad to see this story come to an end, even though I know all stories do, but I hope to see more from you in the future. :)Until the next chapter!
person Diane
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kim.....Great climatic ending!! I loved the hole story and I cant waite for the one shpts, espically about the babies!! but, rember I told you I never scoffed at your story? You made me scoff in this chapter!!!! Inuyasha's kimino can't catch on fire, nore can his leg get burned because it it the protective robe of the fire mouse. (yes people is mouse in Japanese, they changed it to rat when dubbed so it sound more manly) Any who, I still loved your story, and Im sure you knew that, and I believe in artistic freedom, even in writing, so I didnt scoff to much ;) Love Ya sis, great story!!!
person Fran
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, another great chapter! I can't wait for the next. I'm glad that you are doing another chapter, that way I don't have to imagine a description of the babies. Great work!!

My story is call "Mark of Intent" there's only two chapters right now because I have school to finish. I will be updateing no later than the 15 of June. Check it out and let me know what you think.
person Kumiko
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chappy and kool battle scene!!! I can't wait for the next chappy!! I wanna see the babies!!! I wanna, I wanna I WANNA!!!! So plz update soon. :)