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I think you do a really good job of balancing dislike and pity for Kikyo. I don't know how the non-Inuyasha characters don't get around to smiting her for her soul-sucking ways, but that's just me.

I'd be all critical, but I think it's a really good story. Thanks for posting it. I look forward to more.

Where to start. Ok, yes i loved this chapter the results were great, not what i was hoping for but it did for me. As for your other book, it sounds great. Also my best friend is gay too. I FIGHT FOR THEIR RIGHTS TO MARRY. Ok, i feel better. Now back to the story. Kim, girl, you know i'm loving it or i would be writing every time you update. As for your surgery, can i have that done too. I'm just kidding i think i'm pretty, maybe not what others think, but it's what i think that matters. Once again i will say "I Can't wait for the lemon". I'm beginning to think that i'm the only one that reads fanfics and read them for the lemons and the romanic. I hope not, who cares. Well, until you update again we love you. Sleep well and don't over do it. Your fan vikki.

Cool chapter. I really liked this one it was a nice balance between all characters. I liked that Inuyasha is making and effort to spend time with Kagome alone and trying to convey his feelings as best he can right now. I hope Kouga doesn't mess it up or that Kagome finally makes him understand she is not 'his woman' I mean she told him that right from the beginning. And he had said she can sense the shards so she is perfect for him.... Then he said he loved her (all this was said in front of everybody and Kagome said he was 'mental' LOL) Anyway I really liked Sango/Miroku you did great with them. And Shippou was sweet too him doing his best to help even though he is so little. Keep writing you are doing great.

awwww so good!... i cant think of anything else to say...

Wow!!!! I love it!!!!! you are a great writer... you have a great talent I felt part of it and being honest in some parts I could even feel the emotion that was domaining the scene. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!

Woo Hoo!!! Great chapter. I hope when Kikyo said join together to defeat Narku that she didn't mean both pieces of her soul joining together unless maybe for Kikyo's part to rejoin Kagome like it should be. I am not a big Kikyo fan but she seemed alright in this chapter at least she didn't try to kill anybody and actually helped some. It is too bad that Inuyasha thought she hurt Kagome but after everything that has happened I guees I can't blame him. Keep writing this is very good don't push yourself too hard though. BTW what kind of book/novel are you writing?

You are SO bookmarked. Update more! This is a really really good story and I want more!!! :)

HOW DEAR HE SAY THAT IN A MOMENT LIKE THAT. So someone was making her have those dreams, understandable. Happy i hope next chapter Inuyasha will tell her the way he feels. I love those moments when he does. Ok, i do remember you telling me about chapter 15, sorry i was just so obsessed with this story. Update when you can. Your fan.

I noticed that you havn't updated lately so i was just making sure you are ok. I now that you said that you didn't want to update every night that is ok, but first hear me. I have been stuck looking at this fic about every ten minutes hoping that a new chapter is up. I think i more then obsessed, but hey we all are a little. So when you have the chance UPDATE. with love vikki.

Wow great update!!! Don't make yourself too tired with posting, working on the play and your other writing. I write some and posted some at ff.net and at another site. I haven't written in a while. One of my stories just seemed to 'suck everything out of me' if you know what I mean. Anyway this was a great chapter I totally loved it when Kagome shot that arrow that killed that youki. I seem the meditating is helping and I am glad Miroku is looking out for things by telling Inuyasha that if she gains power to fast it could be bad if she doesn't have control. I also like to see Inuyasha looking out for Kagome in his own way. Poor Kagome having those dreams I hope she can make sense of them soon. Maybe when she get more training and better control they will either go away or make sense. And now Kikyo shows up this could be good or bad. But Kikyo saying she needs Kagome's assistance should help if she asks it right and doesn't 'talk down' to Kagome. Keep writing this is good.