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for Beautiful Souls

by BrethlessM

person Anon
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened? Dont leave it there!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!!! Cant wait to read next chapter. But let me tell you, you have a great talent there. Excellent writing.
person PJ
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here I am again up late reading this wonderful story. I am glad they were all able to get through the well. I am also REALLY glad Inuyasha got his cute little ears back LOL You did a great job with this chapter the trip to the hospital was cool that guy telling INuyasha what he was doing I am sure that helped. And Inuyasha kept telling himself that they would help her so he wouldn't "freak" was sweet. I totally didn't expect you to bring in Jiniji (sp?) I think this is the first time I have read a story that included him in the future. I can really see him becoming a doctor after seeing him in the anime/manga. He was so kind and always helped people. He helped those villagers after they were going to hurt him and he even told Rim where to get the herb to help Jaken. I just loved Rin in that episode she was so sweet and determined to help "Jaken-sama. I have seen all the anime most of it in Japanes w/English subtitles and it is so much better than the English language. Anyway not much else to babble about you did a great job I am just wondering where everybody went. I mean if all were gone but Kagome was her family gone too? You will most likely explain it all in the next chapter what Kagome was supposed to do and I hope in the next few chapters that Kouga gets his "big clue/hint" and figures out that Kagome only may like him as a friend. She might not after what he tried in the last chapter. Here I am babbling LOL. babble, babble, babble... LOL ok done now I will wait for the next chapter.
person PJ
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I just read the chapter agian and I realized I asked what happened to Kagome's family but they were not in the room at the end of the chapter so forget I even asked. that is what I get for staying up so late I get confused. *cross eyed* Keep writing!!!!!
person Vikki
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was a little worried about that whole inuyasha turning human. See i'm one of those people that think that he should remain the way he is. In the anime and manga Kagome is also big on how she loves him, for him, not his human side. I really like it when he remains the same. As for Kagome not Dying, i was beyond happy. Yet i wonder where she took them at the end of this one, or what happened. Also, i also am wondering is Sessh. going to be in this story. I was thinking about that when the doc, which i also love him both in the story and when he appeared in the anime/manga, was talking about how demons still live. One more thing, i'm finally done with my play. It was great, i think i told you about that, at my school(i'm a 12th grader *hope do don't think less of me*) we had done the play Les Miserables. It was great. Also, you should never worry about me not reviewing, i always will(unless i die) which isn't going to happen soon. I can't wait for next chapter. Your fan, i love you(not in a weird sexual way).
person Juice
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn way to good polease post the next 1 please
person Stuey
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, i guess juice liked it... juice is a personal friend of mine who i refered to your story. while talking to him after he read it i was trying to recount an episode of the anime series, when i relized that it was part of your story (the chapter with the birds fertilizing the village.) you have done so well in writing this that i'm actually getting it confused with the real thing.... again, i must praise you for this excelent work.
person Stuey
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, that was definatley a change of pace from the last chapter. kinda odd really. i like the idea of putting all the demons in the present tho, that was awesome. anyway, you told me to ask if i got confused with any of the terms so i got 2 more for you. angst, and what were you refering to when you said cannon? thanx, and keep up the good work
person Vikki
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The tears are coming...she will not die the lemon isn't here yet. Please tell me she WILL NOT die. Ok. i feel a little better. As for the last battle have to say VERY nice. i was a little worried much of the time the last battle with Naraku sceens suck but yours was good. Once more i have to bow down to you. Next, I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT RIGHT THERE. The pain, it's so overwhelming, i'm going to die if you don't update soon. I'm sorry all my reviews have been lat see. I'm on stage crew for the play Les Miserables, which i'm guessing you have already heard of that before. Ok i have to go. Update soon. Your Dying Fan.
person Sarah
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! What a fight! I'm glad that everyone got a piece of the action (Go Sessy!)

I'm torn about Kikyou tough. On the one hand, I'm glad she had a happy-ish ending. Afterall, she wasn't a *bad* person...but on the other, I still really dislike her. I guess the Inu/Kag shipper in me just cries out for a beat-down. Oh well. If I want things to be different, I can write my own damn fic. XD

Noooo, Inuyasha! You're so much cooler as a half demon! *cries*
person Juice
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN this is the best lemon i have ever read please please plaese get the reast out