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Great Chapter...nice and long
And as being a self proclaimed romantic myself, I find the whole together forever thing perfectly acceptable
Keep at it!

-the ever faithful Crossbow Trueshot

Nice chapter. I like Inuyasha's reaction to the whole 'adventure stuff' and that he is reading those wonderful stories. That is me too I will take a good adventure/action movie over most other movies. I like a good comedy but was never into mushy stuff too much. Don't get me wrong I like fluff too I just prefer the action. I did like the Miroku/Sango "action" you had in this chapter it was pretty hot. And Shippou having a bad dream was cute just like a kid would do with his parents I am glad Inuyasha picked up on that. Will the well stay open I can't remember if that was already covered or not? I suppose you will cover that in later chapters. I hope Kouga doesn't find Kagome until after the wedding. I also hope Sessy and Inuyasha don't hurt each other too bad or that they can make peace with each other. If not that at least agree not to kill each other or their family's. when I am talking about Inuyasha's family I am talking about the whole "Inu gang" and Kagome's family in her time. I am going read what you have posted so far again so I can see about the well. I can also understand about Miroku saying that they should agree to be "Kami" it would make things easier in that time it they are considered myth/legends, etc. Anyway great chapter I wonder who that was at the end that 'came to life' so to speak. Keep writing!!!!!

ooh... lemony goodness. lmao... juice just showed me a wall paper of sango and miroku in bed :P good timing. anyway, yea, ill let you know if i figure out what the thing i didn't like was. :( i want a cookie too.... do i get one if i tell you how to fix the plot whole? just have it heal when she gets the shikon no tama of family (that was it right?) well, thats my 2 cents anyway, but your the author, so if you can think up a better way, go for it. ok, now im gonna be a critic, so i appologize for my tone now. GO BACK AND READ YOUR WORK, THERE ARE A LOT MORE TYPO'S THAN USUAL!! theres usualy maybe one or 2 per chapter, but i caught quite a few in this one. it makes the work look sloppy. not that i didn't still enjoy it, i rather liked it actually. this will be interesting when you get to the lemon of inu/kag. mark on the neck huh? was that out of the manga or an original idea by yourself? ought to turn out interesting. now ill wait patiently for wednesday.......... ok, so it wont be patiently, but i dont have any choice now do i?

Thank you now 4 the next couple this is realy getting good it just keeps getting better and better and better this is great i can't whart 2 read about Inu Yasha does to his older half-brother this should be a good fight i hope . well i'll see O and thank you for the cookie it was really TASTEY yumy :))) O P.S. the TYPO'S there r more than usual
I WANT MORE

bravo.....just bravo...and yes a sequel will be nice.....

kinda thrown off by the whole.,...live for eternity thing.....but i hope u find someway to work with that

-the ever faithful Crossbow Trueshot

ok, ok, im sorry i didnt read ch 12 the night you posted it PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!. right, now that ive got that out of the way, i hate to say it, but i didn't like ch 11 (PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!! [why does that sound familiar])and its driving me nuts, becuase i cant figure out why. well, anyway, ch. 12 was awesome. all the characters spending an eternity together, everyone getting a wish, and not 1, but 2 engagements. i wonder if they'll all wed on the same day... any way, my only question now is where in the world does it go from here. with naraku dead, you get to play with creating your own villans, and since you're already writing ch.17, you probably already have. the disney thing was a great idea, and i couldn't help but smile while reading the entire chapter, great job as usual. oh, and thanks for answering my vocab questions (yay, i'm learning!) and another thing, i just noticed this while going through the reviews again, inuyasha stopped calling kagome his bitch. did you stop doing that, or just havn't happen to write him saying that in a while? anyway, im off to run for the hills to avoid your sequel *turns and runs away franticly while screaming* ^_^ lol, j/k, i cant wait to see what it and the one shots are about. oh, and juice is right, shouldn't sango's arm still be broken :P sry, but it looks like there really is a plot hole this time. oh well, can't wait for saturday now.............................. is it saturday yet?

Gee I don't know what to say. This story just keeps getting better and better. I do have a question I may have missed this I am not sure. Will their kids have eternal life as well or is it just those that were in the cave and Kagome? (she has eternal life also correct?) And I am also not sure did that include Kohaku I know she didn't get part of the jewel so I was wondering. I am going to read the chapter again and it will probably be clear to me so don't worry about my questions too much. This was a great chapter I am glad you didn't split it up. I was getting a bit scared there about Miroku I thought he was going to mess things up with his trying to be "noble crap" and not marry Sango. He was being a real baka. I liked the whole amusement park stuff and Inuyasha's reaction to the ride "again" was just so cute. I loved little Shippou he is such a sweetie but he can be a little 'terror' when he wants to be. LOL In the anime he was always saying "I am just a kid" and then 2 secs later he was running after them to help saying "Hey wait for me" I just loved him. Anyway keep writing and if the sequel isn't too centered on 'their kids' and still have the "Inu gang" I would love to read it. Update when you can.

Wow!!! that was an excellente chapter, so cute, so romantic, so..... I dont know.... I loved it. The fact of eternity and Inuyasha asking Kagome to marry her maked it different and also special.

Hello again. First let me get this out of me...that chapter was so beautiful and heartfiled. Also i love the idea of one shots between the two stories, this one and the wonderful one that will come next, that i can't wait for. Also, i havn't thought of a school yet. I'm not so sure what i want to do. I need to think of that soon, but i have so many choices. I can't wait until after high school, but i'm worry that i will never see the people i love so much after that. Well, other then that...SATURDAY. Just waiting for this chapter was killing me. Still i'll wait a whole life time to read this story. I told my friends about this story. One of my closes friends that loves inuyasha is so hooked on this story just as much as i am. She's always asking me "is it updated?" or "is she going to get the next chapter up soon?" Sometimes i just laugh at her, but i understand what she's going through. She's new at reading these, and she hasn't gain the feeling of having to wait*can't remember the word for it*. The play went great, lucky no set peice broke until after the show was done. It's was funny and luckly no one was hurt. Other then that i can't wait to read the next chapter. Also i'm never leaving you. I'm going to be for every story you have writen. I already read your other story that was writen. I liked it too. I think it's just you're a great writer that i'm so hooked and that you understand what could really happen and what people want. Well, until we meet again. With love, your fan Vikki.
One more thing...FINALLY PEOPLE ARE NOTICING THE GREATNESS OF THIS STORY...GO ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!

Way to good damn this is really good. 1 question how many chapters r u going 2 have? why i want 2 know is... because i don't want 2 see it end 2 soon. I know i said this befor but this is way 2 damn GOOD. ps what hapend 2 songo's arm in chapter 11?? P.S> I'm sucked in and i can't get out like i would want to. :D