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Tonight is a monumental event. I RARELY write multiple reviews for one fic, but I LOVE this story. Once again I have not been able to read all the chapters posted, but it once again is 2:30 in the morning and work is rearing its ugly head already. Where do I begin? I absolutely adore the resolution of Inuyasha's feelings between Kikyou and Kagome, it was an original way for him to come to terms with the dilemma and I LOVED it! Shock of all shocks, I had no idea what happened to Kagura in the manga (and I completely teared when I read that... I always knew Sess had a thing for the wind sorceress!) and I totally appreciate the footnote and can live my days happily knowing she got her heart back! Amazing AMAZING battle scene that was innovative and new! I've read so many fanfics where the last blow is dealt by Inuyasha and Kikyou or Inuyasha and Sess when Kagome has obviously kicked some youkai ass in the past! KUDOS for allowing Kagome to have a final role! And, I will admit I was worried that she wasn't going to make it through! Aside from being the regular run of the mill geek I'm also a big big Disney freak so thanks for the fanfic tour of DisneySea! I'll probably never get to go there, but I can tell people about the attractions now! Haha! I thoroughly support the idea of a sequel in case you haven't gotten that vibe yet. I can't wait to continue reading but unfortunately being a crisis responder requires you to have at least a FEW hours of sleep! Great work! Can't wait to see if there'll be a sequel! Thanks for writing! ~B.I.G.

I can't believe it you got the years of when Inuyasha's father died. A lot of people take a guess on the time of when he died. I got the time from the third movie. I hope you understand what i'm staying. Also, lemons are hard to write and yes if you don't get them right it's porn. I can't wait for the wedding and what is this new evil can't wait for that. Now Sessh. i'm loving the niceness he showed for Inuyasha. I can't believe that inuyasha didn't notice it was a new moon. That's ok, i understand he wanted to protect his love. I think that sessh and rin are going to be together, maybe not in this story but maybe the next. TEHE. Can't wait for that one too. Please Update soon...your fan, Vikki.

Yes! another long and outstanding chapter. Also well written, the whole "This Sesshomaru" 3rd person was a bit confusing ...@_@... but i got use to it. Also, this may have beena coincidence, but your weasel demon is a summon for the Temari in the Anime Naruto...just dawned upon me...

I also liked the whole named for herself plot twist....but becareful, especially in this time-line driven show.....i have seen many authors write themselves into confusion and end up abandoning a fic because they ended up over foreshadowing. It was a nice little touch but dont try to make an additions where they look into the mythology around themselves and find out what to expect of their futures, or having their future immortal selves revisit them in the modern era....Its a plot hole nightmare

Other than that it was great, keep it up...........also theres a song out about beautfiul souls....thought it would be an appropriate Theme Song lol.....gomen....i sometimes slip into a chibi like enthusiasm state.. 0_o

Good Work

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot

Now this is really getting good and i really like the idea of Inuyasha marking Kagome now i want to see just what Kouga will think of it this should really piss him off. that was reall "nice" of Sesshoumaru to give Inuyasha that gift. Well no typos in this one that i can see and i'll try to get some more friends to read this.

I HAD to review this story at Chapter 4. Now you're probably asking yourself, "Why didn't she read all the chapters posted?" and if you're not asking yourself...well, you should! Anywho, the answer is a depressing one: I have to work in the AM and it is 2am e.s.t. This story is wonderfully written and I look forward to reading the other chapters posted as soon as possible. I love your attention to detail and the fact that you have provided FOOTNOTES for your readers (which by the way I can't read a chapter without also reading the footnotes, even though I may know most of the terms I love that you provide a backstory to a lot of the info!) is amazing! Kudos on your knowledge of Japanese custom! Being the huge geek that I am, I enjoy seeing what you're spelling in your A/Ns (and I love the Sesame Street reference, I also have found myself laughing aloud which causes my neighbors to question my sanity ). I love the story, it's wonderful, and I can't wait to finish reading the posts! Great job! I love it!

This story is very good. I cant even begin on how to tell you how you kept all the characters in there true form, lovely. Any way, I would love to do some fan art for this peice if you dont already have some one...If you think Im worthy let me know, heres my web site http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/fanq/d/i/dianegomez84/dianegomez84.html . Let me know, and where I should post it, somewhere on here or my own web site. Thanks, and of course I leave a link back to you.

:O noooo!!! evil sucks!

Wow! i really love this story. i can't wait for the next chapter.

LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON. I loved it. This was just like you said it would be. One, if not the best, lemon i have ever read. I love sango and miroku pairings. They hold the kind of love that every girl dreams of, but then so does inuyasha and kagome. Their wedding was so beautiful. I could just picture it with in my mind. Now, them being gods, it's about time they were noticed by the village. I love it, now they have a real home. As for shippo walking in on kag and inu, was a little angry at teh kit, but it's all good. Sessh's in the next chapter, can't wait to hear what he has to say. Also, one more thing UPDATE SOON. With love, your forever loving fan (yep that will do), Vikki.

Well, I just found this story this morning and I couldn't stop reading it! You've done an excellent job in bringing the characters to life and keeping them in their characters. I was even impressed at how you did the whole Disney chapter. I'm usually not a fan of scenes like that because some people try to do something like that and it just doesn't work. But the way you did it made sense and didn't corrupt the characters in any way. And of course I am uber excited at the rise of a new villain. I love new villains! :) Anyways, keep up the excellent writing, and I look forward to reading the rest of the story and its sequel!