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First my boyfriend says that he is always nice to me, which he always is. I loved the whole chatper. The mountain and their two weapons being there. I think i understand what you're trying to say there. Also, i have a really good guess on what inuyasha smelt at the end. TEHE. I'm breathing don't worry i'm ok. I also love the history lesson like. The three gods, you were so good with that it most be real. I can't wait for the next chapter to read more. This new evil is sure sounding like a bitch to me. Me and Ton(boyfriend) are waiting to read what is coming next. Love ya, always Vikki

Wow....did I say wow? You never cease to amaze me!! To bad not everyone's relationship is like that....(they'll get sick of eachother) Jk, Im still happy after 3 and a half years, so Im sure thet can make it.....Wonder how many kids will pop out after there rabbit like ways. Im just messing around, Its a great story with another great chapter as usual. Keep it up, keep it comeing! We are all thirsty for more, includeing Inuyasha. ;)

Once again we see another great chapter.......
wish i could write more for now but ill just send u it directly....

Dont get flabbergasted now, pace yourself....we will all wait til u finish as long as u can kepp this excellent qualityup

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot

awesome chapter!!!! That shower scene had me thinking about taking a shower myself (a cold one LOL) This snake youki sounds like she is going to be a problem. I wonder if Inuyasha's attack is a bit different now since he recieved his gift from the jewel. I remember he said he hasn't been in any fights when he talked to Sessy. I know he go into a fight on the way back but I don't recall him using the "wind scar" (sorry can't spell the japanese name even though it sounds so much better then "wind scar") I figured that snake queen would want to get rid of the ones that defeated Naraku because at the moment they are the strongest. I also think Kagome is right they need to get back. What I do think is kind of 'stupid' is that the others are patroling alone they are getting over confident. they wouldn't do that before they shouldn't do it now. They may not age but they can still be killed. Anyway great chapter and I know Kouga is in the sequel but will he be back in this story at least to find out that Kagome is taken? Keep writing I look forward to the next update.

Damn this is to much fun. I wonder at the end of this chapter if Inuyasha has relized Kagome is pregnant or not well we'll see i guess.

Thank you again for another fabulous update! Never worry about the inner geek doing the research because as soon as I read this chapter I pulled out my book of the week which happens to be World Mythology (yeah.. I know.. my friends tease me about it too) and checked out the legend of Izanagi no Mikoto and Izanami no Mikoto. I knew I had recognized the names! And I totally agree that it's one of the most interesting creation stories. KAGOME IS TOTALLY PREGNANT! wow.. that was like Tourette's or A.D.D. or BOTH! But I just had to yell it! And who is patrolling ALONE at NIGHT in the Sengoku Jedai???? Have they learned NOTHING?! I can't wait for you to write Sess in. I have a confession to make... I'm a closet Sess Fan-girl. Now don't get me wrong I'm all about the Baka Inu! But Sess does grow on me from time to time. KAGOME'S PREGNANT! Sorry, so excited! And who are the owners of the Inn?!?! Thanks for keeping me on my toes! Can't wait for the next chapter! (Bows in reverence). Thanks!!!! B.I.G.

EUREKA!! I'VE GOT IT! i figured out what i didn't like about chapter 11. you said it in your reply to vickie (sry if i spelled that wrong, im tired) you go from this raging battle scene, to this hospital scene, and while that's certainly what would have to happen next in nearly every story, it's 'mundane' in comparison. ok on to this chapter. mmmmm... doughnut ..... i mean lemon. yay for more lemony goodness. glad to see the atention to detail about the area. here's somthing you may or may not have caught on to. the hotel share's a name with one of the minor characters of the anime series. ryokan was some kind of gaurdian for a forest who was corrupted by naraku. any idea if there's a connection? anyway, it kind of startled me when the first time you put in there "his wife". not used to seeing that. i like it though, it kind of makes it more... relizable (am i making up words here?) that they really are together now. anyway, i do have a request, while you're doing the sequel, please do through in a lemon here and there for eveyone to enjoy :P ok, hmm well i'm either off to get some much needed sleep, or get back to working on the website. hmm... tough choice.... hey, wait a second, WHEN IS CH17 can we expect it sat. or are you going to make us wait becuase we're catching up to you? oh well, i guess ill go lose myself in my programming...

This is great but i guess the ending i was wondering when you would have the other Inuyasha and Kagome in this. that was the best way to end this chapter. well now for the honeymoon this is to much fun

OMG I love you ....Glomps!.

Looks over a extreamly ticked off gf.....backs away slowly from glomp

Wow that was a fantatic chapter....so long and beautiful ....and long Sweet
And I may have picked up on your little plothole/foreshadowing ill have to chat with you about that sometime...one author to another ..wink wink

anyway it was fantastic...the love scene,the pure amount of realworld and historical detail in the wedding scenes.....you pulled one great story from that kawaii little head of yours so far

keep up the great work!

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot

OMG I love you ....Glomps!.

Looks over a extreamly ticked off gf.....backs away slowly from glomp

Wow that was a fantatic chapter....so long and beautiful ....and long Sweet
And I may have picked up on your little plothole/foreshadowing ill have to chat with you about that sometime...one author to another ..wink wink

anyway it was fantastic...the love scene,the pure amount of realworld and historical detail in the wedding scenes.....you pulled one great story from that kawaii little head of yours so far

keep up the great work!

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot