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THANK YOU i needed that well then the next one should be really interesting an on the little short you wort thats funny as hell LOL

I must tell you....I completely love this story so keep up...update as soon as posible....PLEASE!!!!!!!!

OMG...Dun Dun Dunnnnnnnnnn....Sessy, please be good. Its getting sooooo interesting and you leave me hanging. Rember everyone! By the Inuyasha First Response Pregnency (sp?) test...its 100% accurate. Kim, WTG, you are the best fan fic author I have every met. Granpda, Mama, and the part with Inu and Shippo, all the descriptions are just as they would be if Takahashi wrote it her self! Wonderful! Once again you out did your self! Till the next chapter......

hi again... just wanted to say i really loved the lemon, it was worth the wait and all the effort you put into it, and where the story is headed... but you better give us a happy ending! at least a mostly happy one... sniffs...holds back tears at the thought of inuyasha and kagome not making it out ok... but i know you'll pull through. what can i say? i know a lot fo people don't like the endings where everything works out, but i'm not one of them! i'm a sucker for a happy ending. i'll stick it out with ya and see where you're going.

doors... how could they possibley built their house without doors. oh well, got to hve some fun right :P anyway, ch 16 wasnt bad at all, even though it did slow down some. anyway, i'd love to write more, but i have work to do around the house (the basement flooded :( ) *sigh* got to wait an entire week now...

Please quit inserting numbered footnotes. This is not a formal paper; it's a fanfic. The numbers within the paragraphs are annoying in the extreme. I've written and read enough graduate research papers to fill a large closet and I don't want to feel like I'm reading one when I read a fan story. If you think Inuyasha fans have suddenly forgotten the story elements of the manga or anime, or that they have sudden amnesia and can't remember who the characters are, then include a glossary at the end (although why you think anyone reading an Inuyasha fanfic is unfamiliar with the story is beyond me).

This isn't a flame actually, even though I sound bitchy. I actually like your story, however the distraction of the numbered footnotes and your assumption that you have to explain who each character is and/or each story element is annoying.

Please continue your story and try to relax your style. Thank you.

Once again a wonderful chapter! As per your author's note I am reviewing! Haha! Sango's pregnant! I had NO IDEA! You were sneaky with that one! Thanks for writing Sess in, I mean I know it was your plan and all but I'd like to think I peer pressured you into it too! J/K! Awesome chapter! So, um... how does Jinenji have all this power??? I mean he just whips up documentations all over the place. You sure he doesn't have some inside tai-youkai help? Oh! And Shippo should totally call Inuyasha Oyaji at some point! It kind of means "My Old Man" rather than the formal "Father" Otou-san. I just think it would be hilarious to see Inuyasha's reaction to that since he doesn't take too kindly to Father and since he tends to call Myouga 'jiji' in the manga anyways. Just a some babble which you can ignore since your fic is kickass anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter! B.I.G.

Nice chapter!! I really liked reading a bit more about Kohaku and his thoughts. I am glad Inuyasha put Shippou's mind to rest about being his father and all. I kind of figured when I read about Sango being sick several days in a row that she was going to have a baby too. Not much else to say about this chapter it was really good. I just wonder what Sessy wants now. He could be a bit more polite about asking to see someone. You don't just barge in and demand to see someone especially if they are believed to be kami.... I don't think the villagers will take too kindly to this. But maybe it has something to do with that 'snake lady'. Keep writing I look forward to the next update.

Now this is good both Sango and Kagome are going to have kids. This is just to much fun now i can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru wants to see Kagome about but i guess I'll have to wait till wednesday to find out and happy easter

What's he going to do? Oh, no i can't think.*jumping around thinking the worest*. Ok, it can't be that bad i hope. Ok, i feel better. Sorry this review is late, vacation time is here. Happy for me. Just like always this chapter was great. My thoughts on what inuyasha smelled was right. It's great sango is too. Now the shippo thing had me in tears..He can call them mama and papa now. I feel so happy. I also hope that sango's brother is going to get over the guilt and be a kid once more. Well, until next time. Love ya, your fan.