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for Beautiful Souls

by BrethlessM

person CO85
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well I know it's been a long time since you wrote this, but I'm still enjoying it all the same. All the characters are perfectly depicted just as they are in the series. The only thing I could do without is all the definitions and explanations. I already know them all seeing as I've seen the whole series and read the manga (as will likely most who read this), but i'm sure they will go away eventually.
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oi! i jus found this story on the web & i have 2 say i absolutely loved it! you have alot of talent!
Please right the sequel soon! it is a great plot. && it kept me wanting to read more!
I loved the story very much great work!!
person AnimeFanInuYasha
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU ROCK!!!! Oh and nice writing on chaps. 15 and 16 *wink* *wink* wow that sounded something Miroku would say......EWWWWWWWW I MIGHT BE TURNING INTO MIROKU!!!!! AHHHHHHH!!!! No not really i will nevr be him thank Kami. Anyway, you rock and I'm A HUGE INUKAG FAN!!! Also you write Really long chaps, but that's a REALLY good thing!!!!
person TAJE
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read the entire story. I finally got a chance to finish this Wonderful! Beautifully Written Story! Like I said before, I can see why you were nominated in the guild! I just can't say enough. I am so looking forward to your sequel if one comes about.
person TAJE
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6-10) Whoa! I said this before, I can see why you were nominated. Good show! The battle scene was absolutely striking! Kouga getting some beads to be "Sat" cracked me up! So happy for Sango and Miroku. You're just awesome!
person TAJE
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1-5) WOW! I love what I've just read. What touched my heart with in these five chapters, is when Inuyasha gave Kagome a gift for her birthday. I mean my heart swelled up like a sponge soaking my life's blood which forced tears to my eyes. As well the gifts she received from the others in the gang. As always I love the authors creativity when it comes to using the characters as their (author's ) minds-eye portrayal of the characters. I shall read on. I have to read in parts due to 1 computer and 4 children, oh and a husband. I also love anyone who is willing to educate their readers which I feel you've done well. I am inspired by the talents of you and many creative souls. Count yourself among the (pardon) "Beautiful Souls" for sharing your talents. No wonder you were nominated! Peace!
person anon2323
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, amazing story! It was truly, truly beautiful. Was I started reading, I couldn't stop.

I hope you get around to the sequel soon! ^^
person Akdreamer
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Totally Awesome Story!!!! I will look forward to your sequal greatly!!! Keep up the great work and I'll be reading you again soon.....Thanks for sharing your talent......
person Chelle82
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't give feedback to sotries, but I had to comment on this one. It was so, I guess for a lack of better words: beautiful. It made me laugh, cry and anticipate the characters next move. The talent that u show in this story is remarkable. Thank you for granting us readers with a cance to get a glimpse of your soul and creativity.
person Ofir
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't belive it ended!! 0_0
it was the last chapter so i had to review, ^0^
it was a great story! i really love your writing style ^_^ i can't wait for the squels and one-shots!! ^_^
anyway, i lubed the ending ^_^ and the the chapter before for a moment i was sure miroku will die or kag&inu >
Ofir

P.s
Yay! you chose to use Amara ^0^ actually it's my fav japanes name ^_^ and for a good reason..it's pretty if you know the meanning or not, and meanning is so prettish ^0^


please update a squell soon!!