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Opps!! My bad i kinda misread the AN. sorry about that.

Good chapter, as always. I'm really glad to see that you brought Keiko in. I love keiko - she's a really sweet and adorable girl. I think that once Kagome and her got past the 'misconception', they could be great friends, and if there's one thing that Kagome needs, it's a female friend. Love it, love it, love it. You should of described how Kagura was dressed though -- just to give us a mental picture. :)

Julie

Black Lucy

I'm going to go through this nice and slow for you. Normally I'd include responses like this at the end of my chapters but somehow I get the feeling you never made it past the first few chapters of my story.

1.) In the summary it states : IYYYH crossover. Now for those that don't understand abbreviations that stands for Inuyasha Yu Yu Hakusho crossover. So where you got the idea that this was an Inuyasha Gravitation cross over I will never know. Yuki Eiri is clearly a Gravitation character so it is obvious that somewhere along the way you became confused and felt the need to lash out. Ever consider anger management classes? They'll help you play nice with others instead of feeling the need to curse and name call.

2.) Since you are so hung up on eye color let me please be the one to point out to you that Suichi (In Gravitation) has purple eyes. That should have been a clue to you that you were thinking of the wrong anime series. Shuichi Minamino has green eyes in YYH. Green, purple, eh I would think there is a large enough difference for you to notice but then who the hell am I to judge. I'm just an author.

3.) Here we go with eye color again. Perhaps you should pull yourself away from the tv series and go buy some of the mangas. Because clearly on the covers of them Kagome is drawn (In color mind you) with blue-grey eyes. So before you take me to task in error for something so damn trivial do your research. I could make her with blue eyes or brown. Either one is correct and since it is my fic, it's my perogative to portray her however the hell I want to. If you want to complain about how she's portrayed, go find the author's that give her wings and such. Leave me the hell alone.


Now if you want to whine about the spelling of his name I don't really care. I've seen it spelled Shuichi, Suichi, and Shuuichi. As for which is right, who the hell knows. I specifically went looking on the YYH Official website and they don't have him listed under his human name, only as Kurama. (In case you aren't familiar with the series no he isn't human, he is a spirit kitsune.)


It's funny how out of 130 reviews on this site, over 300 on mediaminer and over 100 on fanfiction.net you are the only one to date who has managed to attempt to take me to task over such stupid crap. Even more laughable is the fact that you were the one who was confused. As it is I'm going to let your review stand. I'm quite interested in seeing what the other readers think of such idiocity. As always, this is Fanfiction. In other words, my plot, my story. If you don't like how I write, find something else to read.


Thanks for giving me a good laugh for the night, I needed it.

Yeesh!!!! Black Lucy must not pay attencion to what she's reading at all. Actually manga Kagome's eye are done in at least 4 different shades of blue, grey & violet on the different manga covers, etc. & I agree with you it's you fic & you can have her eyes be any color you want. I liked the chapter & am looking forward to the next one.

This will be interesting to see what the team can actually do in front of the humans in the mall. Also, Yusuke and Kurama will get to see each other for the first time since their little spat. Maybe while Keiko is keeping Kag company she can explain a little more about the team to Kag and also explain that Yusuke not a bad guy. I dunno. Just rambling again. ^_^

Hi! I've been a fan for a couple of years now and I know this is awful of me to say, but I don't think I've left reviews for you. So before I say anything, let me apologise for the lack of reviews and just being a reader.

So, why am I reviewing now? Well, for two reasons - 1. I'm guilty of being lazy and thinking that my reviews wouldn't really matter to you. And 2. I'm pissed as hell with myself that someone else who wasn't lazy left reviews and they had no idea what they were talking about. The effect of that is going to be you possibly not posting?!?!?!

So, Hear My Plea! DO NOT STOP WRITING! PLEASE!!!!

I've read all your fics here, mediaminer and on ff.net. This is the site I like the most because you've got freedom here. Please, keep going, you've got a great plot with not many holes if any that I can think of and great character development. In fact, I have a request that you go into a little more detail on the initial reaction now that kurama and yusuke are in the same place again. How're they going to work together on this if Kurama wants to feed him to his Sin tree and yusuke would like nothing better than to bury himself in the ground for a while? :)

As far as the negative review you had, honestly, what the heck does eye color have to do with characters' personality???

So, please don't stop and I promise to review each chapter as it comes out on ALL your fics here. I've got you bookmarked - that's how important your stories are to me.

-Audrey

Great Chapter! I really have to tell you that you are one of the very few authors out there that can actually write a decent story. Me not included. v.v*sigh* To tell the truth..I Suck!!! But hey it don't stop me from tryin'. ^.^ I also liked the way you dealt with 'Black Lucy' you tore her review apart and showed her the error of her way. If there is one thing I can't stand besides stupidity it's idiocy. And she seems to have both in abundance. Well, the time has come to talk of many things: of shoes and ships and sealing wax, of cabbages and kings and why the sea is boiling hot and whether pigs have wings!! Though that last may be true. -.-; Either that or I may just be seeing things! If that's the case I just might need a vacation. But that's beside the point, just know that I'm waiting for your next installation. Until then. Tata!

Are you going to ever finish your other stories?

Ha! It's about time Kag gets a taste of her own medicine. To answer your question, it is very likely that Keiko would turn to Kurama for protection. She sees him as a friend, as he does her. So it makes perfect sense. Stupid Yusuke, not carrying his cell. You better send him over to me for a good spanking, K ^_^ Sorry for the cliffy * runs and hides * I promise no more cliff hangers in the middle of a lemon. I didn't plan on it, it just got written that way, ya know ^_^; I wish I could crank out chapters like you do, but it just takes me forever to find time to just sit down and write. I have to do a little bit here and a little bit there. But I am almost done. My daughter is writing a fight scene for me which is turning out really good. Well, I'll be looking for more drama at the mall. Naraku is such a ditz. This is getting so exciting I can't wait to see what happens. Oh and Kuronue is just to damn sexy in this fic. He really needs to get some, LOL.

Sniker - Kogome's just a little posessive there! Now she knows the feeling. Not that Kurama needs even the smallest ego boost! It made for a bit of cuteness in a tense chapter. And Kagura, still trying to get Naraku killed whithout getting involved her self. To bad he hasn't has his tentacles handed to him on a platter yet (feeling a little blood thirsty) Along that line that was some crazy review from BL, you handled it great. I guess Hiei (spelling?) is not the only one who can turn up the heat a few degrees!Hey> Do what I did with that "bulletin" email i sent you, print it and post it on the wall near your computer! Amazing how it seems to fit so many situations. As alays can't wait till your next update.