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by ryukotsusei

person kogas hentai luver
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG
person kogas hentai luver
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG
person kogas hentai luver
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. Too many cocktails tonight. I hit the wrong button. As for BLACK what ever the fuck their name is. Jesus fucking Christ. How can anyone be so fucking stupid. I know the gravitation anime very well. I can not believe that someone could confuse an Inuyasha/Yu Yu fic for a crossover between Gravitation. What fucking planet is she on. I think she owes you a huge apology for her mistake. Fucking retard idiot asshole. Even if this was a gravition crossover, who the fuck cares if the eye colors are different. They change from graphic novel to DVD all the time. I have every DVD that Inu has released to date in English and I still can't figure out what color Kag's eyes are. I also have every Gravitation DVD that has been released and I don't know how she could read, how ever many chapters, and not have a clue as to the fact that it was not a Gravitation crossover. Mother fucking God. I want to beat the shit out of this fucking fool. SHE OWES YOU AN APOLOGY. SHE CRUCIFIED YOU FOR SOMETHING THAT WASN'T EVEN THE ANIME SHE THOUGHT IT WAS. PLEASE LET ME KICK HER FUCKING ASS. I AM SO MAD I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. SOME PEOPLE ARE SO FUCKING STUPID IT MAKES ME SICK. ANYWAY GREAT CHAPTER. I LIKE THAT HIEI IS CALLING NARAKU OUT. HE'S SO COOL. I COULD DO NAUGHTY THINGS TO HIEI TOO. ^_~ LOVE YA GIRL.
person Iamreven
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this around the time chapter 20 posted and am officially, religiously hooked!! I had never thought about hooking Kagome up with Kurama, but it really makes for a good read. As to your nomination for HUMAS, WAY TO KICK HER IN THE ASS AND DARE HER TO ASK FOR THE OTHER FOOT- may she fart toenails for the rest of the week!

Keep it up. I am breathlessly awaiting the next chapter!!
person Autumn Norris
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! THAT REVIEW WAS HILARIOUS!!!! GOD! PEOPLE ARE SOOOOO STUPID!!!! HEHEHEHEHE!!!! My friend Naomi knew all that stuff about Yuyu Hakusho, and she barely get's to watch the show, let alone read the manga. Thanks for clearing up the thing about Kagome's eyes, I was kinda confoosed, I just didn't feel like Googling Kagome's eye color. I understand it being different in the anime and manga. But WOW... that review... Jesus tap dancing Christ it makes me laugh... I hate people sometimes... if she was polite about it, then it wouldn't have been as bad... but WOW... that's all I can say... WOW... I'm speechless... and that's a pretty hard state to put me in... my friend Naomi (reading over my shoulder) agrees... Well I gots ta go! Update soon!!!! I love you with a passion!!!!
person whirleeq
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god... I don't know which I enjoyed more -- this chapter, or your response to black lucy ... that was... classic ;)
person Jasmine Fields
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol. ve-e-e-e-e-e-e-ery nice. Lime... sounds good to me!
person Kura-kun\'s-lovr
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boy, well gee I don't know quite what to say. Boy you're having a bad week aren't you? First with someone complaining about the way you portrayed Hojo and then with someone who reviewed without having th facts straight. And you are quite correct. In the Manga Kagome is drawn with blue eyes. They changed it for the Anime to make her look more like Kikyo or something. And if it is so wrong changing eye color why do people do it all the time? I almost always change her eyes color to blue or sometimes even silver. Also, one other thing, his name is in fact spelled Shuichi, not that it matters how it is spelled, people get the right idea and know who he is. It is spelled that way on the Anime and that is the way I spell it in my fics. That wasn't a very nice flame, of course flamers are never nice as I've gotten a few but never ones as bad as yours. I can't stand flamers who had no lives other than to write in and tell you how wroing you are, even though it's your story!!! Anyway, I'm done ranting even though that pisses me off as well, as I know a lot about both Animes to get the facts straight. Anyway, I hope one of those bullets bite Naraku right in the ass. Wouldn't that be funny. Anyway, so are you any close to finishing this story or are you planning to draw it out and let Naraku escape for the time being. Of course I guess you are going to have to throw some lemons in there and Kurama has to come to terms with his own feelings so I bet it'll be plenty long by the time you're done with this story. Anyway, lets discuss something cheery, like Kuronosuke. How is he doing? Has he stopped stealing your pillows amd blankets like a thief in the night? I have yet to curb Kuronue's habit of that myself. But it's okay when he has an equally warm body to cuddle up next to. So anyway, I liked your new chapter even though it was a bit short, but that's okay. Everyone is entitled to shorter chapters. For now hope you update soon and don't be too steamed for long. Although if you do, I'm sure Kuronosuke would help you in that area; as well as Yoko, I'm willing to bet. Has he stopped trying to peep in your windows at night and stealing your underwear yet?

Kuronue had to chase him away the other night,whil I of course tried to act happy that Yoko was gone. Anyway, ciao!
person Black Lucy
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome does not have blue eyes, you simpering idiot. NO one in Inuyasha, in Kagome's time (LET ALONE HER, YOU DUMB FUCK) has blue eyes. His name is "Suichi," not SHUICHI. Do you have any fucking (literally) any fucking idea who Shuichi is? He's a lovable, homosexual scamp who definitely wouldn't be doing anything sexual with Kagome because he's attracted to Yuki Eiri, who also has golden eyes, like a certain hanyou we all know. And given the evidence, in case you're too dumb to figure this one out: INUYASHA.

Well.. you did have 39 chapters. But why couldn't you get your details straight, even the simplest ones?? (Like names and basic eye color) If you don't find Kagome's eye color attractive in the first place and wanted to change it, then she has no business the way you've written her and who you've put her with.

Have a nice day. Va t'en faire foutre aussi. ^^ (Don't use a translator, ask an actual person who knows how to speak French beyond a mediocre level)

person Ness
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic so far... I'm a fan of your writing. Its hard to find good IY/YYH fics... Also, I read your latest AN, and let me just say I'd hate to be on your bad side. LOL Anyway, the person, Black Lucy, isn't all together wrong. Kagome only has blue eyes on the manga cover. That's the only place i've seen her with them. Oh well I got 2 go now. Looking forward for your updates.

*~Ness~*