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O-o-o. Great plot twist. Total surprise.... And you're right! It is your fic.
At least, you make it kinda believeable that two spirits could... ehrm, do that!!!!

-Jazz-

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You just had to stop there. I'm going to kill you!!!! Not really, but, come on, now I'm dying to know what is going on. There are just so many questions. For instance, is Yoko going to be reabsorbed into Shuichi? Or are you going to perhaps make Yoko come back and them be seperate? Um, is Kagome reeeeally dead? Or is that just what Yoko thinks? And Kuronue better get his ass in gear and realize Kagome isn't there anymore. Um, please don't make Yoko and Kurama be really angry at Kagome. She was only trying to help her mate. Wouldn't you do the same? Don't make them get into a really nasty fight. Um, oh geez, I have to know what happens. And you better update soon or I'll sic my Kuronue on you and have Yoko steal all your underwear. Anyway, yeah it was a great chapter, though there was a whole crisis and things. Anyway I'll be updating later, so look for me. Ja ne.

Bad Bad authoress! evil cliffy indeed. I'm guessing you have a way to bring her back and get Youko out (maybe his crazed rage proving to much for the mirror?) Any way you might still want to duck and cover. LOL No one can ever say your writing is boring that's for sure. Just one thing please please update soon. Leaving us hanging at this point would be pure evil.

Holy f-in' shiznit!!!! I promise not to kill you... but that doesn't mean
that I won't maim you in the meantime. *with what? -- I have no-o-o clue*

-Jazz-

AH!!!!! *screams bloody murder* EEPNESS!!!!!!! OH MA GOD OH MA GOD!!!!! AH!!!! *bursts into uncontrollable sobs* AH!!!! YOKO!!!!! KAGOME!!!!! KURAMA!!!!! EEE!!!!! PLEASE GET OUT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! You're an evil someanawhore! J/K! I'm like in shock right now... it's like 2 in the morning so I can't scream very loud... but I almost screamed... I hate you... with a passion... no I could never hate you! But you're an evil EVIL person! I think you are trying to take my title of "Most Evil Bitch in the World"... but maybe not... UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!! I command you, as the God of Everything, to UPDATE!!!! WEE!!!! Hyper!!!! *runs off to do something odd*

OH who would kill you :P....umm...I never reviewed before but i have been reading from the start.....how come you wanted the fight scene to wait? aw well......good chapter ^.^

Yes it did meet with my approval lol and I remember reading somewhere that you couldn't write battle scenes I would say you did a hell of a job. waiting for the next chapter is going to be agonizing but will be well worth the wait I am sure keep up the great work

Sooooooooo glad you updated. I think I was starting to go into withdrawl! This story is a alot like a great thrill park ride. There are ups, downs, variations in pace, all just making you want to know whats next. Love it - want more! Besides I still want to see you put some serious hurt on Naraku! With the YYH boys to work with, I'm thinking his end will be anything but quick and painless.

I like the idea of Naraku setting a trap for Hiei instead of some fight at the mall. I think it will give you more room to be creative. I am afraid that you're going to kill off Hiei. I don't know why I'm thinking that, I just am. I hope I'm wrong, but if I'm right I will trust that there will be a reason for it. Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself, sorry. Kag's really starting to get on my nerves a bit. She never stops wanting to throw herself in the line of fire without thought of the others needing to stop concentrating all of their efforts on fighting, to watch over her. She is so fucking selfish sometimes and unthinking. I guess it comes from a lack of maturity, she is quite young. But once again I say, ya think she would have picked up a few things along the way in the Feudal Era, BUT NOOOOOO. Anyway, I'm babbling now, sorry. I just printed up all three revised chapters of Circle of Souls. I want to re-read the whole thing since you've added to it. Damn, it took almost an entire ream of paper. Ah well, your fics are worth it ^_~ CYA next time.

Yayness!!! A new chapter!!!! Wee!!!!!!! *bounces around room singing one of the eBay commercial songs* "When you can't seem to find the baseball that's been signed, that's on eBay!" sorry... I like that song a lot... anyways! Great chapter! You made Naraku pick out a chick outfit didn't you??? I can just imagine Naraku standing there in a pink shirt with hip-hugger jeans. Hehe... I make myself laugh! Anyways... update soon!!!!! I love ya with a passion! =)