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for Commitments Made In Blood

by ryukotsusei

person Audrey
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands and wipes a tear* Brilliant twist! Of all places to have a romantic interlude! Kanna's mirror! HA! Ok, now what I want to know is after they killed Kanna, Naraku just disappeared? Seems kind of weird to me, I would have thought he's take the chance to finish them off or at least grab the mirror with Youko's soul to absorb. Hmmm? Well, I'm excited to see Suuichi develop his side of the relationship. :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!!!
what a read. I just spent the past two days reading this story. I would have finished it earlier but life got in my way.
Anyway this is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read, thank you for sharing your creative mind and posting your stories.
I seriously can't wait for the next update.
person Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in)
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Koenma. He's not such a jerk after all. I'm surprised he brought everyone back so quickly without a fight. Well I guess he realized that he needs all of them to fight against Naraku. I can't wait to see how everybody punishes Kag for the trouble she caused. I wonder if Yusuke will ever accept Kagome as Kurama's mate. I know that Yusuke and Keiko are not the featured characters in this fic, but I would love to see a lemon between those two. There are so few lemons with Yusuke and Keiko, which surprises me because they are the only established relationship in the anime. Go figure. I wish you did yaoi pairings. I would also love to see Kuronue and Hiei paired together, but alas, I'll have to write that one myself. LOL.
person Ralina
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!! Another wonderful chapter! I love how you are fitting everything together so nicely. I wonder when they will realize that the jewel didn't make it out with them - hopefully nothing will happen to the mirror (or nobody will steal it...) :)
Keep up the excellent job!! Youko/ Kurama/ Kagome forever!

~Ralina~
person Gem
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you put the boys back together, somehow it just wouldn't be the same with them in their own bodies. Sounds like you have some fun time planned for Kagome as Yupko/Kurama both get to ease their frustrations! And the lemon from the last chapter was great, well worth your effort. This chap was a much needed bit of downtime so we can get ready for when Kagome is revived - still expecting something to hit the fan about her getting herself killed. Now just what twisted little plot point do you have planned for the jewel in the mirror? I'm not even going to try to guess, my mind just does not work that way! Sigh I only wish, now if you ever wanted input with snappy come backs, one liners or plotting payback, that, I could oblidge with. (grins we all have our talents) hanks for the latest update, much enjoyed.
person Ookami K.
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, chapter 42,43 were great... I disliked the part about Kagome getting killed and Yoko being sucked into the mirror... But you have your reasons.... The lemon was ok at least they finished the bonding.... Poor Kourune how he must feel..... Where's Sesshoumaru when you need him.... sighs... I'll let you write the story since your the author besides I want another chapter and soon.... Make us proud...
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! You've done yourself proud once again with another awesomely, grippingly, nail bitingly kick ass chapter. I'm thrilled that Kanna is dead. That kid just creeps me out. THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING HIEI. I LOVE THAT LITTLE FIREFLY TOO ^_~ You have got to be THE MOST CREATIVE AUTHOR IN THE ENTIRE FREE WORLD. I love how you come up with these ideas. Yoko getting sucked out of Kurama and into the mirror, making Kurama a basket case. And then after you killed off Kag (the dumbass deserved it though for disobeying her mate) you put her sole into the mirror too. What a wonderful way to kill two birds with one stone. Working out a way for her to stick around until they can put her soul back into her body and giving us a HOT FUCKING LEMON. I wuv you ^_^ I think it was cool that you had Yusuke shake Kag too after she died. That is just soooooo Yusuke. You are one of my favorite storytellers. Good luck with upcoming chapters.
person Gem
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Un-frickin-real! You "killed" them both off AND still managed the lemon! Wow the cliffhanger was woth it! As you can tell this last chapter was not anything like I expected. I can't wait to see how you plan and get them out of the mirror. ( lol I just had a thought- you'll throw us another curve by doing something very simple like someone just smashing the darned thing!) I wouldn't want to be Kagome either when she gets revived. Given the choice of facing a bunch of more-than-ticked demons and detectives she may wish to stay dead. Though the thought of being tied to Kurama's bed..................................
(no further coments needed on that thought!). SO very glad you decided to update quickly. You get very creative and motivated when in fear of your life from slavering fans!!! LOL I think its safeto say we are appeased for now.
person kuramarose
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree. Maybe you should make Kagome a truely disobedient mate and have Youko tie her to a bed and punish her over and over....and over again...:)