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for Commitments Made In Blood

by ryukotsusei

person bittenbyyoaibug
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weii i was previously know as Lady of the West. I have to say this is a good story and i sencerly hope you get the chance to update this. and you are correct with the manga her eyes are indeed a blueish hazel color, the show would have been better if the animators had kept her unusual eye color, make it a symbol of her miko powers or whatever but left them blue regardless. I'm gladd you chose to go along the manga vein instead of the anime one, that definately lifes you up the ladder of the authors/authoress' that i respect. oh yea before i forget please put some thought into the Kurama (Youko)/Kagome/Kenoru (i know that's not how u spell it but i'm too lazy to look it up) triangle. thanks and keep up the good work. Ja.
person Chickadee01
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a total master at writing!!! You have the most vivid imagination and I really hope you decide to update your stories so that we are no longer out on a limb waiting. I've read all of them and I hope to be able to write like just as well as you can.
person stinkugly
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story but I think you waste too much time with this review thing. There is a time to review and a time to write. You should not mix the to
person ren
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update. Please
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exellent Story so far, I love how it is comming out. Please keep up the great work. If you nee assistance please don't hesitate to email me.
~*Celtic Dream*~
person Priscilla
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa this is an awesome wonderful story! You could have them mate halfway between tranformation. could you have Yusuke and Kagome become closer? friends at least if not sister/brother relationship.could u email a new chapter to me?
person Honeybear
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again. ^_^ Heh I just finished reading this story and I'm soooo loving it. *_* So many yummy twists and turns. You did a pretty good jod on the lemon pie part to. Well any ways Good luck with the computer probs. An I hope you get to your notes soon cause I would love to read more of this and your other stories. >Gives you poki as a bribe to get more writing done.< Got to keep those creative juices flowing.
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Damn, it evaporated him.”

XD That was funny! ^^
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished ch 8... ^^ And right now Hiei totally rocks! Woo! Let's give Naraku a headache! ^^; I shall keep reading now...
person ZeldaFitz
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I went through the stories, I just realized that most of my favorite fics are written by YOU! I'm so glad your computer troubles are coming to an end. I'm looking forward to all the new chapters. Take care! :)