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for Commitments Made In Blood

by ryukotsusei

person myrrdinowl
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm happy to see you're still writing your fics. i haven't seen an update on your other fics in awhile and suddenly i find this one. you have a great talent in portraying the characters. i love how kagome just met hiei in the past! keep up the great work!!
person Ox King
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy moley, Chapter 8 was cool. Nice twist having Hiei and Kagome knowing each other in the past. I wonder how that is going to play out with Shuichi/Youko/Kurama in the furture? How about a bit of a love triangle? Heehee that is so evil. Thanks for updating so soon. I live to check for your updates.
person Autumn Norris
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! This may sound kinda lame... I should know this... but who is Kentaro? Is he a OC or is he part of the show/ manga? I've heard the name!! I don't know where though!!!! Oh, if you want any Rurouni Kenshin info, I'll be happy to tell you anything you want, to the best of my abilities! I haven't seen every episode of the show, but I know the characters and their pasts quite well... so ask me if you want, I'm always ready to help a fellow writer in need!
person xoulblade
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cringed* that must of hurt........anyway thanks for answering me, but how do you do that? Writing so much?? I do have stories out there, I haven't finished them yet and now I want to do a crossover with YYH and Inuyasha Kurama and Kagome, but I'm like you I start one and I start another one :D
anyway I'm enjoying this story, but 'try' to put some chapters in your other ones (I think I need to take my own advice) but no hurry! I can't wait until you update next!
person Kura-kun\'s-lovr
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I've been meaning to review some of your stories, beginning with your first one, because personally I think they are the best. And you said you've never watched Yu Yu Hakusho? Well, you definately should and I agree with the other reviwers who say you keep the characters in character. Anyway, I just wanted to say I absolutely love your stories. Your first one because I love Kuronue and I believe you might have read some of my stories on FAnfiction.net. I know you've reviewed a few of them and thanks for reviewing. Anyway, yeah Kuronue/Kag/Kur all the way on that one! Um, this one and your Yusuke/Kurama/Kag are both interesting and I applaud you for writing that one because as far as I can tell, no one had written a Kag.Kur which involved Yusuke. It is great and you really have agrasp on their characters. Um I must confess I haven't really read your Hiei/Kag because frankly I'm not really a Hiei/Kag fan. That's not to say Id silike Hiei, but I much prefer him to be with Sango if I ever use him in my stories. I read one of your responses that said you might do a Kag/Kur/Kenshin and I think that totally rocks. I myself have been wanting to start a triangle like that because frankly they are both hot and red heads. The only thing holding me back is I don't really know the whole story behind Rurouni Kenshin, mainly because I've seen only 6 episodes as the dvds are really expensive. I'll get around to it eventually but in the mnean time if you should decide to start one I will defintalye read it. I think it's a wonderful idea. Anyway, I think that is all the reviewing I will do. Keep up the updates and try to oevr come your writer's block, because frankly I know how it feels. Trust me out of all my stories, it is getting tough to figure out where to go. Ja ne. Kura-kun's-lovr
person Mija
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh wow, I come back on and see all these chapters???? sooo great I love em and again as I said I know Im going to cry cause of my Inu but as you and I both know they both cant have her so since it is a Kag/Kur fic then my Inu must die or somefin else right??? sniffles..... I know Im going to cry no matter what you are such an awsome writer I just know your going to make me cry.....but its all good, to me if a writer can instill such feelings in a person be it sadness, anger, lust and etc then they are WRITERS to me that is the best to read something and come away with some sort of emotion and you do pack emotion in your fics thank your for that, ok till next chap I will stop ramblin on be safe be happy and be well your fan Mija....:-)
person KogasAngel
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Thud* Man, that was a great chapter. You know, after I reviewed yesterday, I went on a Kuronue hunt. He is a hottie bat demon. Now, for the chapters 5 and 6. Great job. I love how you are drawing out the suspense and keeping me on my toes waiting for the meeting of Kurama and Kagome. I also love how Youko is serious when it comes to her. I can't wait for the next chapter and would not be upset if you did it later on today. LOL. I will be waiting. Great job!!
person bengallover
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Love it, Love it, Love it! And here I thought that Circle of souls was your best work so far I think that this one may prove me wrong. I do agree that Kurama's character needs a little fleshing out but in the last chapter it seems that your starting to work it in. I vote that you have to kill off Inuyasha (it doesn't seem plausible that Kagome would just dump him after 4 years for a new guy if he has not run off with Kikyo). Keep the chapters coming. P.S. I agree with Kougasangel and implore you for a Sess/Kag/Kurama story (what can I say I'm a sucker for guys with long (silver) hair! Yummy!
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again you've got me hooked on another one of your stories. I really enjoyed the first chapter and am looking forward to future chapters.
person Ox King
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo. Thanks for updating. This fic is getting better and better. Please finish it. Ive been reading fanfiction for many years, and a lot of the good fics go unfinished. It would be really sad to see this gem go. 3 cheers for crossovers.

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