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I absolutly love your story! And you're such a fast updater!

I think I might have a solution to your problem with the time paradox thing. Perhaps Kurama could go to the past if Youko wasn't in charge (I don't think he'd like that much though). If he just existed dormant while the 'other' him was still alive, they might be able to both exist at once, or you could have him die 500 years ago and Youko had to wait for the right chance to occur for him to be 'born' again with Shuichi. You actually have a lot of room to play around with the creative liscense we are able to have when writing fanfiction. I'm looking forward to the next update, good luck with it, and keep up the great work!

~Ralina~

I LOVE THIS STORY I CHECK EVERY FEW HOURS TO SEE IF THERE WAS AN UPDATE.
PLEASE KEEP IT UP YOU'RE A VERY GOOD WRITER.

ooh damn that Naraku...grrrrrrrrrrrr...but I soooooooo cant wait to see him try and take Kagome, I really cant, hehe Hiei is extremly more stronger now then before and then theres Youko and Kurama???? not to mention the rest of the YYH gang when they find out whats going on, again an awsome chapter I soo cant wait for more, actually the last two chapters lol, I havent been able to get on but so glad I did to catch these two awsome chapters, great work I soo love to read your fics, keep it up k??? again great wonderfull chapters and DAMN that Naraku...grrrrrrrrrrrrr huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

omg those were two more awsome chapters, I liked the little fight between Hiei and Youko, but when will he explain Kurama and him sharing a body??? and when will Kurama be able to come back out??? omg ok I know its all sad and confussing right now for her, but just imagine??? having both Kurama and Youko??? yummy...they share a body and therefore will share her, she can have a cute ass red head one night and a yummy silver haired fox demon the next, no cheating but some variety...hehe...ok..(pulls mind back from hentai closet) ookkk now not thinking Youko can go threw the well, but then again Naraku did tamper with it and it now allows demons to pass, and Youko is demon...hmmmm this could get soooooooo intresting...hehe, will Youko go before Naraku comes??? or vice versa??? knowing Naraku when he gets his ass kicked the first time by Youko and the others he'll run back down the well to his time, only to discover that haha he cant keep them from coming after him because of his meddling witht he well...hehe this is going to be sooooo good I cant wait...again awsome chapters great writing, sooooo cant wait for more till then be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Another wonderful chapter! Bravo! I just had a funny thought after I read how you wrote it would be funny to have Naraku get run over by a bus or a train. What if his miasma had no effect on anybody in this era because they are so used to pollution already? They'd cough and say that that is some of the stinkiest gas fumes they'd ever smelled, but it wouldn't knock them out or anything! Yes, he could still go around killing people by spearing them, but I don't think he has reckoned with a modern day police force either! Hmph and he thinks it will be easy to take over and rule the people of the future! lol Keep up the great work!

~Ralina~
P.S. Wouldn't that twist things, to have Naraku defeated by regular humans (the police force) before the spirit detectives, or any of the others got there?

Too bad you can't write....Meanwhile back in the Fuedal Era.....anyway I glad you updated so soon :D get some sleep *evil smiles* But I cant wait until you update again!!

omg that was soooooooooo cruel....damn that Naraku.....to have Inu do it??? omg I knew I would cry but to have Inu be the one to kill everyone was even harder to bare...omg still tearing up here, sniffles...and now Youko thinks Hiei did it???? poor Hiei...btw I like that part, how you added her meeting Hiei in the past, I like that alot, it should help her with the transition I think and he knows about Naraku and Im sure he will not be one to take letting Naraku come to the mondern era to take over....again omg that was soooooooo sad...it was even more intense than I expected and I congradulate you on that, it was totally sad and all, but you wrote it well, it evoked the proper feelings and such so you definitly wrote it right...thank you for that, although as I said it was totally a tear jerker I like how this story is progressing, Im just glad I was fowarned and knew Inu was going to die...whaaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaa......poor Inu, Shippo and Kirara and Sango and Miroku. least Miroku didnt feel no pain...sniffles....great work huggles and sniffles your fan MIja...:-)

oooooo *claps happily* 2 chapters!!! Lol sorry, but at the moment if Naraku is going to take Kagome, hes mince meat when Youko gets a hold of him! I can't wait until you update!

Hey you're on a roll here keep it up. I know the feeling it's like you just can't stop writing. All your stories are magnificent I love your mind. You are my favorite aurthor. I wish you would read my story and review. I hope the writers block that you have on your other story "Whispers in the night" soon comes to an end, cuz I am obsessed with that one in particular. When I first started to read that one it was 19 chapters long. I stayed up from 1 o'clock to 5 o'clock in the morning, because I could not stop reading it eventhough I had to get up at 6 o'clock that morning. I love this one as well, I have read it since you first posted it and was one of the first to review. I also love that Kurama and Kogame get together in this one since you said they will not be in "Whispers in the night". Like I said before if you write it I will read it. Keep up the writing I am sure this one will only get better.


Much love,SHADOW OUT.