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actually its my first attempt to write an Inuyasha story (well a crossover) Mostly I have been writing stories about 'Lord of the Rings' Im under the penname, xoulblade on this site and on Fanfiction.net.

Okay enough of that....excellent chapter, before you know it. This story will be 50 chapters instead of 30, :D (jk) anyway dont forget to get some sleep before you take another crack at this story. *whispers* update soon.

wow two more chapters and they were soo good, hehe yup that sounded like Yuske alright and I loved that whole interaction, and omg my heart broke when Kag's mom knew in her gut the moment her daughter said something happened that Inu was dead and that her heart broke for him as well, that was like sooooooo sad and sooooo good, poor Mrs H and Souta they loved him as much as Kags...awwww dang it ya made me cry again...snifffles...but soo k, was a great chapter and sooooo cant wait for more, and as much as I love lemons I cant see them doing the deed yet either, it would be too soon for me to see them just do it..lol..your doing great and I cant wait to see Kags and her mom reunite and talk, I know that chapt is going to make me cry more, but I cant wait...again great writing till next chapter or chapters since I seem to catch it at every two lol, be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija....:-)

Sorry about not reviewing every chapter I tend to get lost within the story.... I have to say that this is one of the best I have read in a long time. I could understand Yoko's pov as well as Kurama's but what gets me is that niether of them mated with Kagome yet. Ya ya I know she was hurt but still it should have happened already. I can't wait til her mother finds out she's gonna flip at first. Well, I decided to let others know about this story... It's to good to pass up.... Oh, if you can, I hope that you try to post your chapters ASAP God I live for Anime. Take care. Ookami K.

*cringes again* I hate to be in the same room when Youko finds out what the toddler is up too!! Oh scratch that I hate to see Kagome's reaction to whatever the toddler is up too!! Soory didn't mean to scare you like that....just keep those 50 chapters coming :D (jk again) nice job on this chapter!! Keep it up. Thanks for helping me!

awwwwwwww that made me cry, that little dream sequence with Inu...ooh my Inu baby...still love him, but if Kags is going to be with someone else why not Kurama I say, or hiei which I find rather amusing myself hehe oh btw ty for the review on that one hehe...again great chapter short but soo sweet and I totally agree, I like seeing Kagome's feelings, it would be weird for her to just accept it all without thinking about it first and I like how your working this out, you do it well, again ty for that short but sweet little chap, untill next one you be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...and sniffles for my Inu....(walks away with tissue in hand...INU!) hehe...

*dreamy eyed* mmm that was sooooo romantic....*ahem* sorry. I was wondering would you mind helping me with my story? Anyway I cant wait until you update, which I know it would be soon!! Besides cliffhangers are your specialty!

Oh my gosh, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. Chapter 11..... yesh, I wanted to go out and kill a few chickens to make my self feel better. It made me cry. Chapter 12 made me feel a bit better. I think it was a bit ingenious having Youko mistaken Hiei as Kagome's wood be killer. A great way to introduce the past Hiei with the present. Chapters 17 and 18 really flowed together in how you introduced the rest of the SD and how Shuichi/Kurama made an apperance. It is going to be interesting in how you are going to finish the bond. Ummm Lemon pie. Also how the 3 of them, are going to deal with being mates when they live in 2 differnt places. Are they going to get married the human way and get their own appartment to satisfy Youko's over protective urges? So many things to think about and write. Hummm, thats a good thing on my part. Keep the chapters rolling. I live for your updates. Yes thats me, you biggest fan for this story.

Oh lordy lordy... you know you could have made this a LOT easier on yourself writing wise by sticking Kurama with just one soul? The Kurama/Youko thing is always difficult. So far, however, you seem to be doing well with it -- especially since you have them with slightly different mindsets regarding Kagome. It makes it more believable.

I still think this is your very best work - relationships where one or more parties has suffered an extreme loss are always difficult, but captivating, if written well.

Did I read that you are actually considering writing a kurama/kenshin/kagome fic? :) I actually read one called 'A Choice of Roads' a while back. It was really good, and the fic that inspired my own attempt with kag/ken - a sadly underated pairing, but I think one with a helluva lot of potential -- but I'm biased; I love the red-haired ex-assassin bishie ;). Anyway, 'A Choice of Roads' stayed very true to canon, and brought Kurama in as a twist at the very end. It was rathar short, but very good. If you haven't read it, and you're interested, let me know - I'll find the link.

Anyway, keep writing, love your work as always :)

julie

Egads you update nicely! Although it would be great to one day find that you posted like 20 more chapters all at once and the story was complete, lol as if right? You're doing a great job, just like your other wonderous stories! I'm really liking the relationships going on here in this one though. I especially like how Hiei is being nice instead of just a plain ol cold hearted jerkwad. It does seem like it's progressing sort of slow, but you cant really rush something when someone is supposed to mourn, ya know? Everyone dies, Kagome cries for like 10 minutes, gets up and skips happily through some flowers holding Kurama's hand.. ha.. ha... no. Anywho, keep writing and updating and the cookies will keep coming! *piles some cookies on your keyboard* Get workin'!

*pats her back* You poor person...Me thinks you need a better email server...What about Outlook Express? It never failed me before! Of course, I probably never received as many reviews in the mail as you have... *blinks* Onward, no more depressing crap...Save that for the fics *creepy smile*

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*ahem* I have a question...well actually more than one, but whatever. How come Hiei's scent on Kagome was so profound, according to Youko's sense of smell? When is Naraku going to try to get Kagome? Why is there not enough sexual tension, darn it! >__< I guess I'm just so used to your other stories where tension was just so...abundant! I actually never reviewed your stories since you update so quickly...I suppose I feared you not responding to my reviews and that the questions I asked would be obsolete by the time you did respond.... I do wonder when the rest of the Spirit team members come about, and if they do: Please, I beg of you, don't make Kuwabara be such an oaf...It's disheartening to read fan fictions that rip on Kuwabara because he expresses his emotions so...vividly...I find him to be heroic in a sense; what with him defending those that need it and kicking bad guys booty... I'm not a Kuwabara fan girl; in fact, I support everyone...even Kikyo! Not the cruel clay monster she became, but the once-living Kikyo! Even I have my limitations ^___~

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