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One other point against the K/K/K pairing in this story:

Keep in mind that you have Kagome in a state of severe grief. I can barely see her opening her heart to ONE person by the end of the story enough to involve a lemon (after all, she's a young girl and her character is very innocent), but two would most definately cross the line of believability and throw her firmly into the OOC catagory.

She just lost someone she loved with all her heart after all; can you really see her allowing TWO in so very soon? Maybe if you were to do a sequel, but even still... *shrugs* I just don't think it would work. Just my opinion, for what it's worth, which, admittedly is not very much ;).

Julie

Yummy, Kuronue!!! ( wags tail ) This just keeps getting better and better.

oooohh this is getting sooooooooooo good. Interesting idea haveing inuyasha visit in spirt. (laughs) even dead he is still possesive and protective. Have the feeling it is going to make for some interesting times latter. I have to add I don't know the YYH characters but I like how your writing Kurama, you just gotta love those naughty bad boys. And this one comes with a responsible side, who knew that was possible?LOL

Oh gods... I can't believe you made Youko do that with her family in the room. Even *I'm* blushing at the thought! Me likey where this is going, but you're going to have to elaborate on Naraku's 'dream power'.

So, you're going to bring Kuronue in, methinks? Interesting...

I really like the interactions with Kagomes family. You write them well and believable and it's very easy to understand how they're feeling. Kudos on that!

One small thing with this chapter: I could never see Youko with 'servants'. Plants that did his bidding, perhaps, but servants? He was always on the move and on the lam and very much a loner, save for his partner. To me, the servant thing just didn't mesh...

Take care and thanks for the extra long chapter. It was really great!
--julie

Yay!!! New chapter!!! Woo Hoo!!!! Sorry... I'm very hyper... anyways... AWESOME chapter!!! I loved the little argument between Yoko and Kurama at the beginning! You had me practically falling out of my chair in laughter!!! Please update soon!!! I don't really need to tell you that... you have like 2000000 chapters out a day!!! And I love you for that!! =) THANK YOU for bring Sessy into this story, even if it's not a major role!!!! I just LOVE Sessy SOOOOO Much!!!!! OK then... about that new story you were thinking about... the one when Sessy kidnaps Kagome... well I would be very very VERY scared to see a fight between Sesshoumaru and Yoko... I would literally be pissing my pants... But that sounds like a pretty cool story!!! I can't wait to read a Rurouni Kenshin/ Yuyu Hakusho/ Inuyasha crossover by you, if you ever decide to write one!!! Well... I got's ta go!!! Wow... this review is hella long... Oh well!!!! Update soon!!!! Oh and I Love you with a passion!!! =P (One of my favorite things to say is '... with a passion'... don't ask why! It just is!)

Hwy, Ryu, I got a bone to pick with you? Where's my Kuronue? Is he lost? Is he captured. Oh and also, through out soul bond he asks me to let you know he expects to be paid in full by the time he is done with his role in your fic. Oh, also he wonders how you are treating his brother. He hasn't seem him since you dragged him off to your bedroom? Have you perhaps tied him up and had your way with him? Oh and also there are some things you must know about Kuronosuke. AS I'm sure oyu've already figured out, he is a major flirt and a perv. Be sure to watch his wandering hands because they have a way of getting away on him. Anywya, nice job on your story. Things are progressing smoothly and I sound like a I'm typing a telegram. But seriously, when are you bringing Kuronue in? I hope it's soon. But for now update frequently. Ja ne.

Wow. This story has come a long way. I'm thrilled with how it's unfolding. Ya know, I can understand Kurama being pissed off that Yusuke went to Koenma. That he didn't trust him to make the right decisions. But, in defense of Yusuke, Kurama was abrupt, defensive, secretive and rude when Yusuke initially came over. Kurama didn't trust Yusuke either. Did he really think that Yusuke wouldn't understand or would try to hurt Kagome. Yusuke wouldn't hurt a girl unless she attacked him. So I think that Kurama should get over it quick. It should be a wash. They both acted stupid. Well, that's just my dumbass opinion. ^_~ I'm really having so much fun reading this. I really hope that Naraku doesn't get the chance to actually capture Kag, she's really been through enough. And having to read that all my favorite characters got slaughtered, especially Inu and Shippo, I don't think my little old heart to take much more. I like that you added Inu's sword into the mix. It makes sense. You are so creative.

Ok now that i gotten over the trauma of "major character deaths" im really getting into this. Lots of emotional ups and downs, conflicts and quite moments, making it a well rounded story. And I appreciate the fact you have been updating regularly, making the time to do so. keep at it.

It is once again I the SHADOW. I liked the first ten chapters but that is all I have read so far. I have been busy writing my story, so now I have to play catch up and spend hours glued to my computer reading yours. I Have been in this situation dealing with your other story. I think you are secretly evil and write massive chapters at a time to keep me from getting any sleep. You are brilliant I love,love,love, your stories. Do try and get some sleep though cuz if you don't your brian will shut down and then what am I to do at night when I get done writing my chapters and want to read your stories. Your stories are like drugs and you are the pusher please keep supplying.I rate your story so far on a scale from 1 to 10 a 25. I think you would do good with a kenshin Xover so go for it. If you write it I will read it . Much Love

SHADOW OUT

I have been reading this story and have enjoyed it so far. Now that all of the characters have been developed a bit it is getting more interesting. I like this side of Kurama. He is usually portrayed as somewhat of a wuss. I can't wait to see how he gets Yusuke back. I have read all of your stories (or at least as far as you have gotten on them) and think you have a lot of talent. Hope you finish them all but either way keep up the good work.