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Well, I am sure that you are fully aware of how I feel about Kuronue. After all, he is all I talk about when I review you. LOL. So, sure. I would love to see a three some. But it is still your story and I love it no matter what you decide. Though, it would be nice to have the reincarnated Sango and Miroku join the fight against Naraku. And what about ole Sessy boy? If he didn't die, it would be nice to see him to have survived the 500 years and join in the fight. Ahhhh, have I told you yet that I love this story? Well, I do. Please update quickly.

Gee. Youd think I started a war. Man, I'm sorry if it seemed like I was demanding a threeway. I mean it was only a suggestion. Sure I would love you to make it one and turhfully I have some suggestions of how Kuronue could tie into it, but when I read some of other people's reviews it seemed like everyone would quite reading it if you turned it into a threeway. Personall I don't care either way, as long as she's still with Yoko. Any who, I did however think of a way for Kuronue to bond himself with Kagome. Say when Yoko goes back into the past that maybe Naraku tries again to get into Kagome's mind and only Kuronue and Hiei are there. Kuronue would have to find some way to save her, if only to help his best friend. He could therefore, be brought into the story that way. But anyway, I didn't mean to cause so many opionions. I don't want people to stop reading your fic for any reason. I think it's really good and it's only going to get better. So, sorry if my suggestion pissed your other readers who aren't particularly fond of Kuronue, off. That being said I must say that Kuronue was completely distressed upon returing to me. He thought people voted against him because he didn't look hot enough. I tried to ensure him that he was plenty hot (after many rounds of deliciious sex) and finally convinced him that he was the absoulte sex god and that you found him very sexy. He's okay now....in fact he's passed out asleep on our bed....oops. He's awake now and vying for some attention. I must go to my honey bunny! Ja ne. Update soon, like in the next few hours.

YEAH!! Kuronue's back!!! *ahem* sorry got alittle bit carried away! *does a happy dance* lol you can tell I like Kuronue, huh? Well......anyway I'm going to the next chapter (nice chapter by the way)

I LIKE THE IDEA OF THOSE THREE TOGETER.

I like the story just the way its going. I'm glad you brought Kuronue to help them, but if you make it a threesome I doubt I'll continue reading. There is just no way I could find it plausible in this particular fic. It's going to be hard enough for Kag to let go of Inuyasha, and where she is making wonderful strides with her feelings towards the siliver Yoko, she still has to deal with our red-headed Kurama, there is no way she would accept Kuronue in a threesome. Not to mention, her mother would never approve, not the way you have developed her character. It's too much of a stretch. Well, I've said my peace and given my opinion because you did ask for reviewer response. I'll be anxiously waiting to see what you end up doing. ^_^ I've thoroughly enjoyed this story and all your other stories so far. Keep up the wonderful writing.

I myself, love the Youko/Kags pairing.... BTW, great story!

Hey, just a question! And you don't have to answer it if you dont' want to, but, what exactly is your planw with Kuronue, of excuse me, my Kuronue? Have you thought of perhaps letting Kuronue join their little union? I know that your first story is a Kuronue/Kagome/Kagome pairing, but um....well it's just a thought. And Kuronue is hot!!!!!!! Well, this was a great chapter and I can hardly wait for my Kuronue to show up? Oh, gotta run my Kuro is calling. And have fun playing with Kuronosuke! Ja ne. Oh and one more thing, I released a one-shot ficcie featuring everybodie's favorites Kurama and Kagome. It is on aff.net and fanfiction.net if you're interested.

Yay! Yay! Yay! He's finally in! My Kuronue looked sooooo cute! *Squeals* So I'm pleased to see you have taken my suggestion to drag Kuronue into a three way or whatever it would be called. I think it's great and should be done if you can find a way to bring him into their relationship. I just can't see him without Kagome, just as I can't see Kurama without her either. And I agree. I don't much like Boton either. Here's a thought, though. You did say that you weren't going to make her be in love with Kurama, just thatb he gets annoyed with her presistant quetsions. You could make her fall in love with Kuronue. That way if you decide to pair Kuronue up with Kurama and Kagome, it could be another problem to deal with, not that you don't have enough. And oh, pelase do not bring back Inuyasha. I know he has given Kurama basically his blessing, but its Kagome who would be torn in two. I fear that she would turn away from Yoko even though she is bonded to him. And that would suck! So, anyway, thic chapter was great and I'm glad to see you've finally brough my Kuro in. When he returnred to me for a brief intermissiong he assured me you were treating him most kindly except when he and his brother tried to steal yours and mine under garments. I assure you I punished Kuronue accordingly. Please make sure you punish his brother. Ja ne. Oh, an thanks for reciewing my story and I have indeed started a Kuronue/Kagome one-shot. I'll probably ave it finished by tonigt. Also, I think I'll do a Sesshomaru one and just a Yoko/Kagome one. But for now, ja ne.

Well... I'm a serious stickler for plot personally. Once a story becomes contradictory, I abandon it. Really. This one has a lot going for it so far, but a three way pairing would blow it to high hell. Firstly, there's the Kagome issue to deal with: I'm having a hard enough time accepting the fact that she's so easily taking to Youko - okay, the bond thing helps, but the girl hadn't really even begun to grieve for Inu. Secondly, there's the whole bit you mentioned about the bond making it painful for other people to even touch her. Thirdly, there's the possisiveness of Youko. Fourthy, Inuyasha. Fifthly, the Higurashi family. I can go on and on, but that about somes up my primary objections.

NO NO NO PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A TRIANGLE. UGH. This story is just so not set up for a triangle, I fear that if you do it now it may ruin it. I love your stories girl, and this one in particular -- I am only being honest. If you cater to each and every whim of each and every reader, you're plot is going to quickly spiral out of control.

Okay.

That being said, I really liked the fact that you did the second half of this chapter from Kuronue's point of view. It was refreshing to say the least, and I could emphasize with his level of confusion. I really wonder how he's going to react when he finds out that Youko has not only taken a mate, but a miko of all things. I'm glad that you also brought shippo back -- his death in particular had me swalling a particularly large lump in my throat -- and I'm interested to see if you are going to 'bring in' the reincarnations of Miroku and Sango. If you did so, the reincarnated Miroku should still have his Kazaana -- Naraku's not dead, after all -- and he should make quite a good ally, not to mention comic relief. Again, I understand if you do not - sometimes it's hard to bring in all the characters, especially when you want to keep your plot moving along.

Good job with this chapter, and keep up the great work! :)