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for Commitments Made In Blood

by ryukotsusei

person ZeldaFitz
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never review, but I thought I would send you a bit of encouragement.

This fan fic is the FIRST I look for every day, and my current favorite. I love the intensity of Youko and the fact that you are staying true to his actual demon nature. As for Hojo, I've read other fics where he is portrayed as an abusive, psycho stalker, so I'm not sure what that reviewer's problem was. The plot is interesting and the characters are well-developed. Thank you for including Hiei and Kuronue ( crushing on them,too :D ).

As a writer myself, I offer this advice: To thine own self be true. Everything else is commentary.
person redtatsu
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If it helps, I injoyed what you did to Hojo. He is an annoying little shit.
person Autumn Norris
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff sniff* thanks for the tissues! *blows nose*... anyways, great chapter! I hate people sometimes... like my science teacher... OK... today we were getting ready to correct yesterday's assignment, but I was absent yesterday. Well she gave me the assignment and I did it in class, but I did it a little different then everybody else, 'cause she had given some certain instructions yesterday... well she gave the answer to a question and I asked if "blah blah" would be acceptable too, because I hadn't gotten the other instructions and she was like "well that's why you come to school everyday!". And there's this big thing going around school that I skip a lot, I don't, but my parents let me stay home when "Halo 2" came out so I could play it, and my dad once let me stay home to finish my Algebra homework. So everyone is like "had to finish your Algebra homework?" or "How was Halo 2 yesterday?" IT PISSES ME OFF!!!!! And I have no clue why I'm telling you this... I just felt like telling everyone... anyways... now that I got that out of my system! Update soon! I'll read it tonight if you update tonight!!!!! And I guess I'm not a bad person... I still feel really REALLY bad about that review though... *walks off to have argument with P.J. (my dog) if I'm a bad person or not, then randomly notices Naomi's dog Zeek eating the tissue I recently threw in there.* "EWW!!!! ZEEK!!!! WHY IN THE HELL ARE YOU EATING TISSUES?!?!?! AND FOR THAT MATTER, WHY AND HOW ARE YOU AT MY HOUSE?!!?!?!!?"
person Autumn Norris
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... my computer fucked up and somehow I sent you 4 of the exact same reviews... dumbass computer... anyways! If you feel like it go ahead and read them all...
person Gem
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like poor ol Hojo finally tempted fate one to many times. Now we just have to wait and see how bad Kurama gets punished for his instinctual outburst. Oh, like how you made the point about Kagome not being able to treat him as a human. He is not just a guy with ears and a tail, but truly is a whole other animal so to speak. Still, sounds like he will not be getting away with that kind of behaviour.
person Ellen
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps her hands and jumps up and down* OOOOOOOH, I love it! I love it! I love it!

It took me two days to catch up (I'm not a speed reader) And once I caught up I realized how offten you were updating (simply amazing) and failed to leave a review.

I love Inu/YYH xovers. I'm riding on a rollercoaster of emotions with this fic with all the ups and downs.

*bows to the queen of clifhangers then bows again to the queen of updaters*
*offers you some pocky* Thank you so much for sharing.

The only thing I was wondering about was Kag's mom seemed way OOC but then I thought about it and read some of the reviews you were getting and it seemed pefectly logical that she would freak, she is in shock and under alot of stress. She seems to have accepted the situation though. Hopefully she will mellow out some more. Your fic though, and I love it, so no complaints.

BTW I think what happend to Hojo is completely understandable.

*gives you a pile of marshmellows for roasting* ()_) ()_) ()_) ()_) ()_)
person Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in)
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. I really liked the way you explained that Kag has to stop thinking of Yoko as a human boyfriend. He is/was the most dangerous demon for 1000 years before he merged with Suuichi. You can't unteach what is instinct no matter how much Kag would like to. I also liked that you had her mom trying to set her straight as well. And Inuyasha would have killed Hojo if they were mated. Sometimes I would just like to shake Kag and wake her up from her school girl ideals. In other words, she needs to get her head out of her ass and really take a good hard look at who she's mated too. I mean, she's spent several years in the Feudal Era dealing with demons. How can she not have picked up a few things about demon nature and instinct, geesh! And finally, you do not have to explain yourself to anybody about why you wrote a scene a certain way. It's your freakin fic. And the key word here is FICTION. We all take these fics that we love so much and try to create a different take on it and the characters. Shit! I write M/M graphic sex with these characters. I don't think that's what the creators of these animes had in mind, ya know. Anyway, YOU GO GIRL! And write what flows out of your heart, gut and mind. You are truly one of the most creative and original writers I have come across. I put you in the top five of my personal elite favorite writers. And I have boxes and boxes of fics from favorite authors that I have printed up to save and cherish in case a site goes down. Your's are included in those. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter ^_^
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hey, don't get down just because one reviewer saud somehing offensive. On the other hand, I hate flames too! So be as angry as you want. You're story is good and I agree. I don't much prefer Hojo either and it's fine with me if you want to mess with him. He's bound to appear something, I mean he's infatuated with Kagome. So I liked you chapter and I do hope Kagome forgives him soon. Then they can move past this occurrance...and sleep together!!!!! Hahahahahah! Cough, hack! Sorry I went off a bit on you there. But thanks for reviewing my story. I should have another chapter posted tonight and a correction to the first chapter! Update as soon as you cool down. And send my regards to Kuronosuke! Hope he's been keeping you company on those cold nights....if you know what I mean! Ja ne
person Kura-kun\'s-lovr
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hey, don't get all up in arms just because some people can't get past the fact the Hojo is as dumb as a brick and Yoko is a loose cannon, well sometimes, even in bed...oops. Did I just say that? Well, don't let Kuronue find out. Anyway, I think you're story is great and this chapter was cool. I agree that Hojo is annoyinh. I mean he's always around and too dumb to relalixe Kagome isn't interested. Anyway, thanks for reviewing my story. I think you were one of the first reviewers so yay for me! Kuronue and I send out regards to Kuronosuke. Let us know when the wedding is. He complained that you wanted a real wedding with a ring on your finger when all he wanted was to put a mark on your neck and take you to bed. He assured us you set him straight in that area. I hope he's been keeping you company on those long, cold nights....and you definately know what I mean!!
person Kura-lun\'s-lovr
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah and one more thing! Please do not pair my Kuronue up with that stupid Boton! She's been after him for years and I contantly have to beat her off with her own oar!!!! So no Kuronue/Boton!