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Great story please finish

I love this story. I mean it's so good. I can't wait for more. Please write more. I just started reading you stories and I love each and everyone of them. I can tell this is your first one. You might want to...I don't know tweak it. I mean I like it the way it is, but some ppl don't know good stories when they see them cause they get more cought up more on the writing then the story itself. Love it write more please

Yeah... pretty good... I'm sorry about whatever problems you're having.... don't worry, this pace is good so far. Don't worry about updating too slow or whatever, as long as you don't give up on it... I guess it's all ok.

i only just started reading this story today and i'm only up to chapter 9. but i have to say so far so good. i really like your fanfic and hope you complete this story.

It's too bad that you have very few reviews. I'm pretty sure it has to do with the title and summary (though I personally like the title), because the story is good. I guess it's understandable that you're giving reason to Sesshoumaru's OOC-ness. A lot of people just state the fact that their character is OOC, and just let the reader wonder why. I'm torn between admiring you for that, and pressing on to the point of the story. I do like the fact that you consider the reader's questioning about an OOC-ness in a character, but I'm wondering if that would be as well with other original characters. If so... then you might lose track on your story's plot. I say this by experience, this is in no way a flame. It's just a thought. I enjoyed this story, so... don't take this the wrong way, k? Till later.

Nice chappie. Just letting you know I'm stickin' to it. You've got my support.

Hm... I'm wondering, is Sesshomaru and Jade's child the one with the highest power/ability? It seems that way since the story is focusing a lot on them, though I notice this is mostly in flashback. Am I right? Please continue.

Ok... well thanks anyway. I guess I will have to read the whole thing, huh? No biggie, it's actually a good story. Please keep it up.

I'm wondering, are InuYasha and Kagome having a kid too? This was a nice chapter. And stubborn Sesshoumaru... I guess you can't choose whom your heart belongs to, right? Please continue.

One comment: That name, Bo 'Ra Cho... Where did it come from? It reminds me of the spanish word, "Borracho" (which sounds exactly the same). That literally means DRUNK, which is hilarious... Pretty weird, don't ya think? Well... that's in case it was unintentional. Do continue. It's pretty interesting, and I can't wait for your update.