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for A crystal hunters findings

by Atropa

person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. They are awfully free with their little secret. I hope Ulf doesn't turn out to be a danger to them. I didn't understand the whole fiance thing. Did she finally realize that Sesshoumaru isn't pretending? Food for thought. I just love her traitorous body. *smiles smuggly* LOL That whole thing with the Japanese woman was funny. So, in Sweden, would markings such as Sesshoumaru has, not stand out as odd? It would here in the US, but it seems that no one really notices there.

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh. What a twisted mind our Sessy has! That was too hot. Nice buildup by the way. Trying to get away from Sess will kill him. She's his chosen. He'll think that she hates him or that he is somehow deficient. OMG! His arm! I'm gonna choke her, conniving wench. Yep. My poor poor Sessy. That's not to say that I wouldn't need some air if I was attached at the hip to a man nearly twenty four seven. But, it's gonna kill him.

Can't wait for the next chappie.
person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One:

That is so funny "A Woman!" LOL Wouldn't want to be you...not yet anyways. *smirk* Off to the next chappie!

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I didn't stop and review at chapter two. Sorry. LOL The whole episode the her 'toy' was soooo funny. I like her wit; the description of what coffee is, her bosses new jacket, etc. *chuckle* I so did laugh about the toy though. Still grinning.

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He got rid of those guys fast. Aw, he wanted to protect her. So sweet. LOL She had to tuck him into his pants. That was too funny. LOL

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've made him a real card; rushing into the bathroom, attacking her friend. What's next. Looking forward to the fun! On to the next chappie!

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! Brought straight out of the anime series! And he wants to stay and protect her. How...*sniffle*...how sweet.

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Her boyfriend, eh. That was too adorable. *melodic chant*: Sesshoumaru smiled! *giggles* Oh, Mia, you sure are a lucky girl.

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aisai! Koiishi! Oh, I have butterflies all in my chest! Pant, pant, pant. Awesome, awesome chappie. *races off to the next*

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person Snowfall
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dun, dun, dun, dun. Asian people at the hotel? This might not be good. Oh, the whole dressing room scene was so amusing! Off to read more. I have to do separate reviews or I forget things. Sorry

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