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for Our Creation

by Pilipa

person Megen
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far... just PLEASE let it be Inuyasha, I'm such a Inu/Kag fan. =^.^=
person gv
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who's baby is it!!!!!!!!!!!! yasha's or hojo's.??! if it is hojo i swear i am gonna die
person Alliekat
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm is Inu the daddy? very curious....
person Ashes
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very intriguing. and very suspicious...Kagome may have had a date with Hojo, but that doesn't mean he's the father...does it? Please don't tell me Hojo's the father! I don't think I could stand it! I don't think he's got the stuff to turn Kagome's head in that direction. And two hours alone with Miroku? No way he's the father. Kagome would have slapped him silly!! Not to mention what InuYasha would have done to him... or Sango for that matter.
anyway, the chapters are short, but move along pretty nicely. WacDonalds!!! Yay for WacDonalds.
But the whole thing begs the question....what *did* Kagome and InuYasha *do* for those three hours they were alone together.... hm...Please update. I'd love to read more!
I can't wait to see the look on his face when he finds out!...whom ever "he" is... :-)
person KogasAngel
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see either Sesshomaru or Kouga be the father. I think that it would be funny to see Inu Yasha's reaction to his 'shard detector' being pregnant by one of the two demons that he hates the most. Well, naraku doesn't count. He isn't a full demon. Great story. You are doing a great job.
person p423
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please let the daddy be Inuyasha
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. Because I have such a fondness of Kagome paired up with one of the YYH boys it would tickle me pink one of them was baby's daddy. Hmmm I could see Yusuke somehow, probably as drunk as she was and of course he hadn't broken up with Keiko. I'm evil mwahaha. I look forward to seeing what you have planned for future chapters. Please update soon.
person Marlingrl
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...I'm thinking from this chapter that there's a possibility of Miroku being the father. Now that would be cool and would set up some serious issues in the group. I love conflict and angst, they're so much fun to play with! I'll be looking forward to future updates of this story to see if I'm right. :)
person srg1
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter! I really, really like your story. Wish I could give suggestions. But no matter what you do, this story is starting out great!
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi! did Kagome back herself into a corner or what??? i'm going to take a deep guess that the baby is not InuYasha's. judging by the remark of the girls telling kaggers to go out with Hojo again, that the baby is ::gulp:: his? god please let me be wrong. i dont' think that boy would know what to do with a naked chick in front of him!!!! great story and intresting development. does miroku read the back of teh kit cause if he does...he'll understand real fast. eep!! imagine having to explain that one to an angry hanyou...no thank you!!! great job and keep it up!