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for Our Creation

by Pilipa

person Anon
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person animeluva
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm really hoping that u will make Sessy as the proud daddy...inuyasha is like a brother and Hojo is just wrong....
not to mention Miroku is spoken for....the only lodical choices would be Sessy or Kouga but i'm pretty sure he would have marked her
...and been really overprotective if it had been him....so i hope you will chose SESSY!!!!! Update soon..
person Cassie
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read the story and I feel for Kagome and all but who's the father Inuyasha, Hojo, Miroku, Koga, even Sesshomaru maybe...Its a really good so far but I really would like to know who's the father and how will Kagome explain it to him that shes pregnant with their child.... Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter.
person kiyo
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHO IS THE DAD!!!
person bill
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it appears to be clear Hojo is the father. sigh poor inuyasha he's going to be so sad. And I bet he'll say some hurtfull things.
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i'm rootin for sesshy in this story...i'm a sucker for Sess/Kag pairings hehehe
person Ashes
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, you've got me really hooked. i like that it could be three different guys. naughty kagome, what have you been getting in to? but i guess since she knows who the father is (we can assume) that it's only one of the three. i hate to be traditional, but i really hope it's inuyasha. it would be so like him to think that having sex with kagome would be no big deal and basically forgetting about it. or maybe he's just ignoring it because *she's* ignoring it. ...hm... i can't wait for the next chapter. update soon! :-)
~ashes
person Dragon Lady
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am quite intrigued by your story, though I'm a little disappointed at how short chapter 3 is. (though I can understand your reasoning.) Personally, I hope it isn't Inuyasha. There's just too many Inu/Kag fics, and it'd be nice to see this be a bit different. I really don't think Hojo would be able to see Kagome topless without blushing furiously and quickly excusing himself, let alone have sex with her. My personal pick for father would have to be Miroku. 'Cause, first of all, you know he would! Secondly, as has already been pointed out, the potential angst and tension could prove to be quite interesting. With Inuyasha, it wouldn't be entirely unexpected, so there'd be little, if any, tension, and with Hojo, if you ignore the fact he probably wouldn't have sex with Kagome, while there could be quite a bit of angst and tension between him and Inuyasha, it wouldn't be as it would be if Miroku were the father.
person Annetta
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far! Personally I would really like to see Sess as the daddy. It would be really interesting and I think it would bring a hell of a lot more conflict and humor that any of the other possible baby daddies. Not to mention I would just love to see Inu flip his top over Kag having the child fathered by his hated half-brother!!!!! he he...I know Im evil, but what can I say? I love Sess/Kag pairings! Keep up the good work with the story! *hugz*