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by taiyoukai99

person kalaong
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great stuff! I was reminded of this fic when I saw this great pic-maybe InuYasha's mates are performing-and preparing-for their Inu God!
http://www.animefanartist.net/gallery/jamesb-h-lineart/Kagome_and_Sango?full=1
It's at James Bender's fanart gallery.
http://www.animefanartist.net/gallery/jamesb

Could you maybe add a bit more? Detailing some of your ideas on how youkai multi-partner relationships work? Perhaps showing Kagome and Sango having a little fun by themselves waiting for their mate-and then realizing he's been watching the whole time?
There's lots of potential for sweet hentai here-I can just imagine InuYasha laying smugly on a big, comfy bed in a hobbit-hole-type den, cuddling one sleepy, special woman in each arm, gently stroking bellies big with HIS pups.
person beccapatty
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I loved it!! Im sooooooooooooooo glad Inuyasha mated with Kagome as well.. I didn't want her to have to deal with the 2 alone.. now there are the 3 of them.. ooo sweet bliss! lol I thought it was soooo cool that Inuyashas eyes were back to normal and he was when he was fucking Kagome .. and how he said her namee.. instead of bitch or anything.. ahhhh sooo happy! lol.. and i absolutely loved when he howled out FUCKKKKKAGOME! hahah that was awesome! thank u for such a pleasing awesome update! Ur an awesome writeer and I love this story!
person justme
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Loved reading it. Hope there is more to it.
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found the recent chapter to be pretty sad... Poor Kagome.. being forced to accept love from Inu Yasha with conditions and strings attached.... Inu Yasha bluntly tells her he loves Sango but nothing about loving her. Making it like having her mate with him as seen as a task or a chore. It seemed she accepted because she so desperately wanted Inu Yasha to care for her. Then I found it alittle annoying that Sango seemed selfish and couldn't let Inu Yasha and Kagome enjoy being intimate without pushing herself between them. Now Sango and Inu Yasha have a level of communication all their own that doesn't include Kagome... YES this is beautifully written and a great story. dont get me wrong.. It just seems Kagome is getting the left over ends of the stick. Well I think I complained and grumbled enough... THis isn't meant as a flame... Just compared to Sango's turn and Kagome's turn it was shocking. Please update when you can... I AM enjoying the story
person i Naraku
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now do one with I, Naraku/Sango/Sesshomaru. i would late Sesshomaru be apart of the mating with my love...
person Dj
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it keep it comming!!!!
person Kiki Ortega
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was amazing. Was that the end? It doesn't have to be... ya know?
person Inu-Shinta
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very fascinating chapter. Maybe you could have Inuyasha making-love to either Kagome or Sango while his other mate sits on the first one's face.
person pj
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its geting juicy come on lets go stop typing oops im talking to my self well back to thhe storrryyy!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god...i had never read a i/s fic and it was just sad...i felt for kags..but it made me very horny do i guess it surved its perpous...so please update