rate_review Reviews

make me cry why don't you! :) great story. are you going to add anymore chapters?

Oh my that was sooooo koooolllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this. please hury and completeit. will sess and kag ever ? well ill be holding my breath till i see another chapter.


ps sess is my favorite charecter.

God, did I tell you lately that I adore you?

That last chapter... absolutely brilliant. I really like the tension between Kags and Sesshy, and I was so sure that they were going to finally kiss for a moment there... gah! Way to spin a yarn... you are seriously one of the best writers in the fandom, hands down!

--julie

Oh, btw, are you going to bring Shippo in at some point? He's a big 'unanswered question'... :)

I have been reading this fan fic for the last 3days, and I am very impressed with it. I cannot wait until the next chapter....so until then I shall be waiting patiently and possible*

Sel!

One of the best Sess/KAg fics I have ever read, and there have been some really good ones out there. I loved it so much....That is until it ended. *Looks down, and sniffles a little.* I just love sesshoumaru...Kagome is ok too I guess. *Drools over sesshoumaru.* Anyways! *Wipes chin of drool.* I gave this story five stars, if there was a 20 star rateing well...Lets just say it wouldnt be enough, because this story deserves so much more. I just have to read the rest, could you please email me when you finish the next chapter, I would be very greatful for it. *Bows with respect to the story writer person.* PLEASE! Hrm, all else aside, you are a great writer, and I will make sure to check out some of your other stories, as soon as I get a bit of sleep, I have been reading for like three days on this story alone, and it takes alot out of a person. Ok, thats about it, I dont have the strength to put my delight of reading this story in anymore detail, so I will just leave it at this. Update soon, and happy writing.

I have failed to tell you that the first part of the story literally brought out alligator tears. Oh, I've shed a tear or two on the best stories, but never soaked my face until you came along. You almost had me sobbing when Kagome wept on Kouga's shoulder. That high keening wail is no stranger to me. I am so glad the story later takes a turn toward the more lighthearted. I have recommended this story to several people and if I haven't put it there already, it will be in my recommended section soon enough.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

One thing that really impresses me is how you are able to have the characters work through every detail of their thoughts and emotions. I just don't know how you do it, but I will figure it out so that my own writing will improve. By the way, I have read much of your story several times. Also, you have such wit and put in such funny lines. I liked paragraphs that involved such things as 'dragon barf'. Also along those lines, the part about Sesshoumaru picking his nose. This sort of internal dialogue runs throughout the story. The way you put things into words, and so many different words and phrases, is to die for.

The premise of the story seems original and leaves room for so many subplots that you could carry it on indefinitely. Don't you dare though! I want to see our two characters get together. I don't think it's going to take much more for Sess to realize that he really does care for Kagome. It is a nice quirk of Sesshoumaru's character that he enjoys arguing. I believe that he stays in character with his attitude that sometimes it is what people don't say that is most important. Something of that nature. I like the way you have portrayed Kagome with a rambling thought pattern. It makes for a lot of fun. Your idea of having them fight their need for each other's comfort, and later their affection for each other, adds so much angst without being dark or painful.

It is wonderful that you are taking their relationship through the buildup of small gestures and of collections of shared experiences. With such great writing, I hope you make the ending just as wonderful as the entire story. Please don't have a sad ending. You have given us so much hope for the two, but as you said, hope doesn't promise anything. See, we do remember those little words of wisdom you inject.

I look forward to reading more and I am sure I will find other things on which to comment.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

another great chapter. i really enjoy your work. dark and depressing at times, light and humorous, very powerful stuff. thanks so much for sharing your work with us. :)

Speaking as a woman who has lost a kid in a store I could feel the panic you evoked when Sesshoumaru smelled Kagome's blood. The added fillip was when you had him smell the smoke and tears; that just piled it on.

Kagome causes such strong reactions in Sesshoumaru. I know you've diverted his attention for now but with this incident I don't know how much longer you can have him avoid his feelings.

Thanks for another thought provoking chapter.