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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this version of Kikiyo/Inuyasha/Kagome and the wish. It is very creative and new and "fits". I wish you could be just a little less dark (only Inu/Kik only had 2 yrs together? -so sad all that sacrifice). But you are the great writer and I'm just a reader. Thanks for sharing some great storytelling. I hope you enjoy writing it as much as we (all the lurking readers like me who only review once in awhile) enjoy reading it. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have tears in my eyes reading the last half of this chapter. they are so inlove with one another...I hope that they can find comfort in eachother and overcome all of the obsticals set before them...and maybe there can be a way for her to live a life time with him with a life span like him... This is an excellent Story, I can't wait for the next update and the one after and the one after that....and so on.
Sel~
Sel~
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The one thing I don't like about your chapters are they don't go on and on. When I start to read them I get so into the story that I really don't want it to every end. This story is so good. I never saw or read a story on adult fanfiction that makes me look for new chapters every week. I just want to say that you are a awesome write.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that the childish review is out of the way and I've had time to think about chapter 31...
You must know that, for me, only the stories that I cannot predict are intruguing. So, I like to speculate. That's what makes a story worth reading. Here are the thoughts you have inspired.
Well, Sesshoumaru is an idiot. He never should have taken up with Kagome on that first journey. He should have just left her there. But, the damage is done. He is an idiot, but I guess love or extreme boredom, whichever the case, will do that to you. I enjoy the nice little realizations that you allow Kagome and Sess, only to have them squashed until the next opportunity to raise their ugly heads. And suppressing the feelings of desire only makes them grow stronger. Hehehe. I wonder why his feelings were stronger when she came back. Was it because of the old 'absence makes the heart grow fonder'? Which is sometimes true. Somehow, I wish there was more to Sesshoumaru's original attraction to Kagome than just a form of entertainment.
Mmm. Fuyu seems to understand Sesshoumaru better than Kagome. And, perhaps their relationship. She's really smart too. Sesshoumaru understood what Fuyu was doing when she wanted him to let Kagome practice on him, which makes him much more intellingent, maybe, than I sometimes give him credit. But then again, you do tend to surprise me on that point. I believe that even Fuyu knew that Kagome wouldn't hurt Sesshoumaru and that the practice would bring out more of Kagome's power. Maybe she's not such a bitch afterall. Fuyu may have also been testing the strength of Sesshoumaru's loyalty. I'm sure that all of Fuyu's 'spoonings' will help keep Kagome from flinching in battle.
Sesshoumaru understood about Kikyou though I can't say that I understood that whole discussion. (BTW, if that evil sorceress was responsible for Inuyasha and Kikyou's death, I want some very serious revenge. Melt the bitch slowly and painfully with Sesshoumaru's poison. Yeah, that's the ticket.) Bunny trail...He tries to comfort her like he did Rin. It was sweet when he told Kagome that she was not like 'her'-- meaning Kikyou. You caught me by surprise there. He can be insightful at times. However, the conversation on that point later that night confused me.
When are we going to Edo? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? *snicker*
I guess Sesshoumaru believes that when he tells Kagome how she smells, he will be admitting to himself that he will not be seeing her again. That was heartbreaking. And, don't forget, he lost, or won that bet depending on how you look at it and owes himself an indulgence.
I'm still trying to figure out what you're going to do when the flow of the passage of time for the past meets evenly with flow of the present. Will Kagome find it has all been a dream? Will Sesshoumaru show up in the present as an innocent little white doggie and lure her to his home? Or will she grow old before his very eyes and go home to die of old age as the passage of her time becomes quicker than his? The possibilities are endless. Considering your other story, I do not dare hope for a 'happily ever after' ending. I'm sure it will be bittersweet though I'm saddened just thinking about it. *sniffle*
I am worried about Sesshoumaru's home. I imagine it will have to be destroyed, or something, eventually since the modern day Land of the Rising Sun does take over. I hope it's not gruesome or terrible.
Well, there are the many thoughts and speculations you have inspired. I had to do a lot of cutting and pasting to put all these thoughts in order for you and it took quite some time. You deserve it. You don't know how much of your story I have re-read several times while awaiting an update. I told you that I intend to learn from you and I meant it. It is already affecting my current writing. Also, I just enjoy reading it that much.
Anxiously awaiting your next chapter,
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
You must know that, for me, only the stories that I cannot predict are intruguing. So, I like to speculate. That's what makes a story worth reading. Here are the thoughts you have inspired.
Well, Sesshoumaru is an idiot. He never should have taken up with Kagome on that first journey. He should have just left her there. But, the damage is done. He is an idiot, but I guess love or extreme boredom, whichever the case, will do that to you. I enjoy the nice little realizations that you allow Kagome and Sess, only to have them squashed until the next opportunity to raise their ugly heads. And suppressing the feelings of desire only makes them grow stronger. Hehehe. I wonder why his feelings were stronger when she came back. Was it because of the old 'absence makes the heart grow fonder'? Which is sometimes true. Somehow, I wish there was more to Sesshoumaru's original attraction to Kagome than just a form of entertainment.
Mmm. Fuyu seems to understand Sesshoumaru better than Kagome. And, perhaps their relationship. She's really smart too. Sesshoumaru understood what Fuyu was doing when she wanted him to let Kagome practice on him, which makes him much more intellingent, maybe, than I sometimes give him credit. But then again, you do tend to surprise me on that point. I believe that even Fuyu knew that Kagome wouldn't hurt Sesshoumaru and that the practice would bring out more of Kagome's power. Maybe she's not such a bitch afterall. Fuyu may have also been testing the strength of Sesshoumaru's loyalty. I'm sure that all of Fuyu's 'spoonings' will help keep Kagome from flinching in battle.
Sesshoumaru understood about Kikyou though I can't say that I understood that whole discussion. (BTW, if that evil sorceress was responsible for Inuyasha and Kikyou's death, I want some very serious revenge. Melt the bitch slowly and painfully with Sesshoumaru's poison. Yeah, that's the ticket.) Bunny trail...He tries to comfort her like he did Rin. It was sweet when he told Kagome that she was not like 'her'-- meaning Kikyou. You caught me by surprise there. He can be insightful at times. However, the conversation on that point later that night confused me.
When are we going to Edo? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? *snicker*
I guess Sesshoumaru believes that when he tells Kagome how she smells, he will be admitting to himself that he will not be seeing her again. That was heartbreaking. And, don't forget, he lost, or won that bet depending on how you look at it and owes himself an indulgence.
I'm still trying to figure out what you're going to do when the flow of the passage of time for the past meets evenly with flow of the present. Will Kagome find it has all been a dream? Will Sesshoumaru show up in the present as an innocent little white doggie and lure her to his home? Or will she grow old before his very eyes and go home to die of old age as the passage of her time becomes quicker than his? The possibilities are endless. Considering your other story, I do not dare hope for a 'happily ever after' ending. I'm sure it will be bittersweet though I'm saddened just thinking about it. *sniffle*
I am worried about Sesshoumaru's home. I imagine it will have to be destroyed, or something, eventually since the modern day Land of the Rising Sun does take over. I hope it's not gruesome or terrible.
Well, there are the many thoughts and speculations you have inspired. I had to do a lot of cutting and pasting to put all these thoughts in order for you and it took quite some time. You deserve it. You don't know how much of your story I have re-read several times while awaiting an update. I told you that I intend to learn from you and I meant it. It is already affecting my current writing. Also, I just enjoy reading it that much.
Anxiously awaiting your next chapter,
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am again in awe. You've woven the web of emotions, motivations, and history between these two characters so beautifully. I was completely transported. I just can't say enough. Bravo. I can't wait to see what is next.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.< Why dont they freakin get it over with, that was horrible suspence. Lol. Great chapter by the way, even tho it put me on edge more then a few times. Darn that sesshoumaru, he changes his mind a freakin lot. Anyways update soon suspence is killing me.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You are torturing me to death, but I can see where it is necessary to work through their hesitation, their fight to do nothing to endanger their already precarioius situation. It makes my heart hurt for them. You have done it again. *sighs and clutches chest*
Keep up the good work.
Snowfall
Keep up the good work.
Snowfall
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a genious...
I think I'll faint...
There is no words to describe the beauty of your fanfic...
Seriously...
Love your story!!!!!
Update soon!
I think I'll faint...
There is no words to describe the beauty of your fanfic...
Seriously...
Love your story!!!!!
Update soon!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who are you?
What are you?
Where did you come from, and what deity said: "And she will be named Resmiranda"?
Every single time this thing makes its rounds at the top of the InuYasha page, the heavens part, obscene mathematics converge at every plane of existence, and my head nearly explodes from the boundless energy of it all.
I'm frickin' losing my mind over here, but it is such delicious suffering, isn't it?
You practically own the InuYasha section!
What are you?
Where did you come from, and what deity said: "And she will be named Resmiranda"?
Every single time this thing makes its rounds at the top of the InuYasha page, the heavens part, obscene mathematics converge at every plane of existence, and my head nearly explodes from the boundless energy of it all.
I'm frickin' losing my mind over here, but it is such delicious suffering, isn't it?
You practically own the InuYasha section!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect.