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It's so deep I like and at the same time feel bad for sesshoumaru in this situation. Nice chapter.

*does a little creativity-dance in the hope to get another update*

I often say that you touched my emotions, but now let me say what touched me. First, when Kagome tried to get back to save Rin and could not. Second when she met up with Kouga and all Kagome's feelings seeing him again and not have the others around thinking back during their time hunting shards and chasing Naraku her breaking down in tears in his arms overwhelmed by her events. But what really broke my heart is when she saw Sango. Not being able to reveal herself seeing Sango's mortality deminished to age and blindness tore me to tears that now just typing this review my eyes are welling up tears. So I thank you for this. You're really good and I patiently wait for your updates. Until then Peace!

TT_TT 'How the mighty have fallen' It's a beautiful story, though, I cannot finish it today, so I'll just check back later, kay?

This story is one of my absolute favorites! It's a very interesting angle on the sess-kag pairing. I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon!

It's been 4 weeks since your last update. (Which I'm surprised I remember, since normally my brain turns to absolute mush in the summer, and I can't remember what day of the week it is. =P ) Any chance that you will be updating soon? *uses the big ol' puppy-dog eyes* Please?? I swear, this summer is absolutely determined to make sure I understand that "patience is a virtue," as there are a few things I'm patiently waiting for. (Or, at least TRYING to wait patiently.) Darn virtues... Well, I suppose I'd prefer to wait a while longer for updates than have you rush and have the new chapter not up to your usual quality. Though it isn't always easy to wait. *beats impatience into submission, then hides it under her bed.*

Hehe... Anyway, I absolutely loved the nightmare scene. I find it so absolutely amusing how Sess is disappointed that Kagome wasn't trying to seduce him, even though it worked so well. lol! And Fuyu's constant spooning! lol! PH34R 7H3 $P00N!! XD Well, maybe I'll back and reread Fugue again for now. 'Til the next update! Adieau!

Great story!! I love everything about it. Usually I don't like Inuyasha stories with "budding" relationships, but this is just so darn good!! Keep it up!

Of the last two chapters, 30 and 31, may favorite scenes are: Kagome's thoughts after she gets injured, the witty banter between her and fuyu while she was being stitched, Sesshoumaru panicking when he smells her blood and his handling of her thigh along with her musings when he does it, the Land of Not Caring What Fuyu Thought, Kagome kicking and screaming while Sess carries her to the field, his realization that what he'd done was insane, the nightmare scene, Kagome making up new sounds for pain and the way you ended on her going back into training. I'm probably forgetting something. Oh hell, I liked all of it, but those are my favorite scenes to reread. I'm dying waiting for another chapter, but I know it's the busy holiday and summer. I'm behind on my updates too.

Snowfall

I'm a big fan of your writing. The relationship you are building between Kagome and Sesshoumaru is great. I love your writing style and your plots. I try to read anything you write. I know if you wrote it I'm in for a treat. Thank you for all of your hard work bringing good stories to us! I highly recommend you to anyone.

I just spent the last 4 days reading this wonderful story. (Didn't sleep last night, read this instead, hehe) I found it on somebody else's recommended reading, and it was the only IY story, the rest were Naruto, which I normally do not read IY anymore for several reasons. Too cliche, too immature, overdone, the list goes on. But not your story. Your story is absolutely spellbinding. I see why you have been nominated by the fanguild. I learned several new words while reading your story, which is awesome, because I am the one usually teaching others new words. I can not remember finding any errors. I like the way you start out a chapter and then go back and explain, it did get a little confusing one time but I figured it out within a paragraph or two. (It was the chapter when Sess n Kag were staying with the wolf family/herb keepers after defeating the dragon, I read it so quickly, I would be hard pressed to tell you better than that) That is about all that I can offer in terms of constructive criticism. Honestly it is so hard to leave a good constructive crit when you find an author of your skill level, cuz all I wanna do is rant and rave about how awesome the story is, and how much I love it, and how I'm going to hunt you down and flog you with a wet ramen noodle if you don't update your story, hehehe. Often times in a story this long, I find myself saying, just get to the romance already! But you have the perfect amount of sexual tension between the two of them, and the action sequences as well as the suspence are riveting. Wow, I am just so glad that I found this story! Oh, I almost forgot, what is the definition of Madoushi? I did a search last night and none of my Jap/Eng sites came up with anything, the closest I can figure is it means black magic priestess?