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Hey, tis Okita again, I still love your fic *smiles* good luck on the next chappie

Wow, I was hooked the minute I started reading it! Very well written and I love how you balanced the characters personalities to where the reader can actually relate to them. It portrays a fantasy that makes you feel like it's actually reality, you have great talent! I hope you someday finish it, I can't wait to find out what happens next!^^

Gotta say love it so far, you got me glued to the pc all day! Email me when u update pretty please!!

What an awesome story! It actually makes the Sess/Kag pairing believable, and although the story is serious it is at the same time hilarious. I love the humour: the banter between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, the wry observations, the turns of phrase, the self-delusions... :oD
A very minor complaint is that Sesshoumaru at times seems a bit too empty-headed to me. He doesn't have to be perfection incarnated, but I don't think that you'll grow old as a daiyoukai just by braiding your hair (well, thinking about it) and growling at people. A bit more thought and attention to your surroundings are needed. But as I said, it is a small complaint in an otherwise terrific story. I can't wait to read more. I just hope you don't plan on turning it into a tragedy. I still feel bad for Rin's fate...

Man oh man! Gosh I'm crying. I'm..well...sobbing actually. Hold up a sec. I can't see with these bloody tears in my eyes. That was so beautiful. Your an amazing author. I started crying like a newborn girl when Inuyasha came into the story. How Kagome missed him for his "brash optimism" I seriously think i'm gonna have a mental breakdown. Your story...that chapter. You know I lost someone like the Inuyasha you described. What a happy reminder of him. I hope you update soon. I thank you for all the wonderful chapters you have posted and will post in the future. And...thank you for that reminder.

I am litterally in tears, that last bit of the chapter is so sad, and heart wrenching.
I wish to god something could happen so she would live, so she could stay by his side always, Become a demon herself..
I don't know...but something... Your an amazing writter...I will be waitting for the next chapter as patiently as paossible.

Sel~

*sob* omg, that was just... wow. The emotion in that chapter was palpable. I went back and reread chapter 31 so I would remember what had happened (I often do this with anime too) and it made me remember just why I found this story so exceptional. Unfortunately my power went out half a page into the chapter last night, so I have been impatiently waiting to get off of work so I could finish reading this ALL day. Exceptional writing is worth the wait, but there is always that little twinge of excitement when one of the really good authors updates their story. I look forward to the next update. Do you plan on doing another arc for this story? I was curious about how many more chapters you forsee.

*Sniffles.* Ima cry if they dont have some damn sex, Because after 33 chapters, and her thinking she is gunna die, he better give her what she wants damnit. That would just be plain mean lmao. >.> Plus already looks like he is working her up. But seriously, this chapter was great, it was so funny I was laughing almost all the way threw lol. "He didnt do anything to me!" ..."Oh that is terrible." Lmao. Ok, anyways, I have to cut this short, its late. Loved this chapter, and thanks for telling me in email that it was up, helped out bunches. Update soon, thanks.

i really love your style of writing, i havent been able to unglue my eyes from the computer screen for...6 hours now haha... cant wait till next installement... oh and by the way are you from croatia/bosnia/jugoslavija? the little verse from marios song got me wondering, ja sam iz bosne ^^

anywayy keep it up

one of the best stories I've ever read! keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!