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NOOOOO!!!!!KAGOME!!!You are so cruel and so wonderful at the same time!!!!I love this story and I really hope I see a new chapter soon!!I don't believe in this ending !! Kagome deserves a happy ending god damn it!!

I love your story. I re-read the second to last chapter and I was crying hysterically! Then I read the one you just posted up a couple days ago and I cryed-once again- hysterically. The promise that he made to her. By all means-is a wonderfilled promise. Also when Sesshomaru passed by Kagome, when brushing passed her, I felt a pain in my chest. It was like I could FEEL her emotions. I felt the same pain when he told her she smelled like morning. I cryed and I cryed. The battle scene was absolutely amazing too. The last sentence though, through me into hysteria...once again crying my eyes out.

Your story is one of the only ones that has made me cry so much. You put so much emotion into your writing that it leaves me breathless. I feel like your words are describing EXACTLY how Kagome, Sesshomaru, and I feel, which is simply and utterly divine. I hope you update soon because I want to see Sesshomaru's reaction to Kagome falling on the ground with a knife lodged in throat.

O.O *Cries!* Its not fair!!!!!! She cant die thats just not even right. *wipes the tears from her eyes.* Arg darn sad stories >.<,,, *sniffles.* Im fine. It was very very good, you are a true artist in your work, I love every second of this story. And I hope my complaining didnt anger you, I wouldnt want that. I just get frustrated when the good storys end in the middle just because the writer forgets about them or something like that. Its happened alot, like to five of the best stories I have ever read. Im truely sorry for complaining, I dont realise what im saying sometimes cause I just get out what I feel in my reviews. Thank you for your storys, they are truely great. ....I hope kagome lives...now i feel really sad and depressed. *sulks off.* update soon, and write me when you have thanks again.

DAMN! Kill me why don't you! Oh My Dear Kagome! What an EVIL CLIFFIE! Now I have to be all depressed until next update. You should see me! Red eyes, stuffy nose! You're really great! I love how graphic you are. I humbly await your next installment! Peace! (sniff, sniff)

*Cough sniffle sob.* I love this story, and I hope sesshoumaru rips the evil bitch to shreads for doing that to kagome. She just cant die!!!!!! The story would be so fucked up without her! I mean whats sessy without kagome it just seems like they are made for eachother. -.- Im all sad and depressed now.... By the way I wanted to say sorry for complaining, so many of the good storys have been stopped in the middle, and it gets me depressed when i think the best story I ever read is going to end out of nowhere, im still cheering for you to finish this, I love it so much and I wanna read to the end, Freakers this is a long story, but I love it. ^_^ *Huggles.* Love it seriously, but now im all depressed... *Sulks away.* ugh update soon and write me when you do please, thanks.

that was amazing! it took me a couple of days but I loved it. i hope you write more. dont kill her! sess could bring her back w/ tensiga! the begining was sad enough. however u do it im sure it will be good. cant wait for more!

your evil you know that pure evil.
i liked it though good work

I sped so quickly through this fanfiction in two days that the end of chapter 34 was like hitting a wall with spikes in it. Hope you update soon so I can remove the bloody-mess and regain my breath so I can begin to move again at normal pace.

*Takes one long dramatic sigh* I am in total awe of your writing. From the beginning I sat there wondering if I could ever be as good as you, but you are just so awesome... I'm...I'm...I'm in awe. (Sorry for repeating myself. ~_^) You have the greatest sentences that just leave me breathless and makes me think and all that lovely stuff a story is supposed to leave inside of the reader. To write emotion like that...wow.

I love how Sesshoumaru is 100% canon. Many authors, including myself, try to make him over dramatic and just not him no matter how much Rin might have softened him up. There is still that duty of being a youkai, of being his the lord, of being the strongest out there. I love how Kagome is human. She has strengths, weakness, feelings that aren't being pushed upon the reader...she's me, she's real.

I also love how this is an adult fanfic. It's not a simple love/adventure story where they consumate their feelings within two chapters, but a true story (or as close to truth as it can be) where the emotions of being together with someone comes into play before the extra stuff. I also enjoy the fact that big words are used, even though my personal dictionary is very, very small. It makes me feel smarter to read it. ^__^

I suppose I could write forever about this, but do need to get to my school work. (Booo!!) I just have to finish by saying that your fanfic is the best one I've read in...um....like...forever. This is great and I'll try to wait for the next chapter the best I can. I must read more of your work.

>nye<

Oh my goodness! =0 I've been following House of the Moon for... ever, but I'd never got around to reviewing it. >_>; I must commend you- you've done the best job with the ever-complex Sesshoumaru. (Bet you haven't heard that ever. lol) Not too soft, yet not too yeilding... purrrrfect. I must say though, I almost had an aneurism waiting for this last chapter... and I must say- it was worth the wait. I would greatly appreciate it if you could keep up the wonderful work. =) (I'm glad the story didn't die in the ER)