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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG This chapter is just so amazing! The actiong is well told and very detailed. The emotions between them are so raw and pained, I almost cried in some instances. You do a great job of painting each intricate facet of every scene, every character's thoughts, every emotion. The ending was an evil cliffy, but Kagome's effort and fighting was truly amazing, and I give props to you for making Kagome into the great character she should be. I look forward to the next chapter. Excellent job as usual. You never disappoint.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear god almighty! And I thought you couldn't do any better than the other story of yours that I've read, good lord, you're way too good for simple fanfiction crap, you need to get into it professionally!
Aside from your obvious talent, I thought it encouraging to mention that I cried.... yes, in this last chapter that you've written.... and I'm still crying like a damn emotional wreck, hell I've got tracks upon tracks of dried up tear crust all over my damn pathetic face that I feel disgusting. Damn. Please tell me you're not leaving this story like this, totally incomplete, like hell you're gonna leave it just like that without that fustrating sexual tension between Sesshomaru and Kagome, right?? God I hope I'm right, if not then I'll be miserable.... hell, there's a stupid knot in my throat just thinking about it finishing it there.... but perhaps that's because I'm already crying because of your stupid, stupid, beautiful writing.
Do me a favor will ya? Please notify me when you do update this fic, I'll be damned if you don't. -kinoko kinoko_thelittlemushroom@yahoo.com
Aside from your obvious talent, I thought it encouraging to mention that I cried.... yes, in this last chapter that you've written.... and I'm still crying like a damn emotional wreck, hell I've got tracks upon tracks of dried up tear crust all over my damn pathetic face that I feel disgusting. Damn. Please tell me you're not leaving this story like this, totally incomplete, like hell you're gonna leave it just like that without that fustrating sexual tension between Sesshomaru and Kagome, right?? God I hope I'm right, if not then I'll be miserable.... hell, there's a stupid knot in my throat just thinking about it finishing it there.... but perhaps that's because I'm already crying because of your stupid, stupid, beautiful writing.
Do me a favor will ya? Please notify me when you do update this fic, I'll be damned if you don't. -kinoko kinoko_thelittlemushroom@yahoo.com
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome! You are now my God of Words. ;_; But what about the Tensaiga?
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please dear lord i hope this story is not finished yet. This is one of the best ones i have read .......ever( to prove it ive been going to work shit-faced because ive been reading till one in the morning) But please dont stop now , ill go nuts. Anyhow, got to go to ed it's half past midnight here. ciao val
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i could not stop reading this Untill I fail asleep at my dask. plese updeat soon.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wish someone would contact you about turning this into an inuyasha movie its so good! i wasn't really into the sesshomaru/kagome pairing until i read your story now i have one of my own. keep up the good work
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so into this story. You have done wonderfully in reaching the emotions of your readers! Please update as soon as possible. I am on the edge of my seat!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, keep on writing. thnx.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was well worth the wait . i love the part when they "parted" and the ending was great! now you just gotta revie us all when we fall off that cliff you left for us to find!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! We finally made it to Edo! I hope that Sesshoumaru fries that sorceress’s ass!
I am so glad that you decided to give us readers the answer to Kagome’s question about her scent. I know that it wasn’t something that you had begun as a significant part of the fic. Thanks for taking the readers into consideration on that point. My heart fell when I read it because I knew that it didn’t bode well for Kagome.
The scene of them on the road, about to leave one another, built such hope even though we knew they would part. It was a very sad moment, but you made Kagome strong. Great job. You didn’t disappoint us when Sesshoumaru returned. How could he not? He’s her demon after all.
I’m glad that he could sense her arrow coming. I was worried there for a minute. But man, a dagger through the throat? And wasn’t Tensaiga broken? *whines* I don’t remember! What’s going to happen!? You’ve got me biting my nails!
Though your chapter was as introspective as we’ve come to expect, there was no hesitation to get on with the action. I’m sorry, but I had begun to skip over some of the paragraphs as there seemed to be more and more insignificant detail as the story went on. At least, that was my perception. Not in this one. But, you know, once I can afford the ink, I’m going to print this fic out so that I can sit down and re-read it any time I want. I have no real complaints at all.
Awesome chapter; I will be waiting with bated breath for the next installment.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
I am so glad that you decided to give us readers the answer to Kagome’s question about her scent. I know that it wasn’t something that you had begun as a significant part of the fic. Thanks for taking the readers into consideration on that point. My heart fell when I read it because I knew that it didn’t bode well for Kagome.
The scene of them on the road, about to leave one another, built such hope even though we knew they would part. It was a very sad moment, but you made Kagome strong. Great job. You didn’t disappoint us when Sesshoumaru returned. How could he not? He’s her demon after all.
I’m glad that he could sense her arrow coming. I was worried there for a minute. But man, a dagger through the throat? And wasn’t Tensaiga broken? *whines* I don’t remember! What’s going to happen!? You’ve got me biting my nails!
Though your chapter was as introspective as we’ve come to expect, there was no hesitation to get on with the action. I’m sorry, but I had begun to skip over some of the paragraphs as there seemed to be more and more insignificant detail as the story went on. At least, that was my perception. Not in this one. But, you know, once I can afford the ink, I’m going to print this fic out so that I can sit down and re-read it any time I want. I have no real complaints at all.
Awesome chapter; I will be waiting with bated breath for the next installment.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave