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Its so good. I'm happy I found this story

Not sure if my review got posted or not. Doing this from my phone is such a pain. Lol.

So, I read this amazing tale and thought how nice it was to finally see someone actually peg how Sesshomaru would likely handle the situation. I mean, he's a lord. That means he's responsible for a lot of lives and he can't just walk away like it's nothing. I think it's perfect how you made him reluctant to cross that line... and he didn't until his situation changed. That was awesome and very true to the character. At least, that's how I feel. ;)

I love that you took your time progressing the change in him from grief to love. Beatiful!

It is wonderful to witness the way you portray them interacting. Such a dry personality mixing with such an animated one. So much subtle and somewhat dark humor between them. Which makes perfect sense, giving what they've been through.

But I MUST mention my favorite part!! The Ramune! Most people from where I'm from have no idea what that is and the amazing thickness of the glass bottle! AND HE SHATTERED IT?!? Damn, Fluffy! I have a couple of friends that had a sledge hammer and a Ramune bottle... well, that didn't end well.

So anyways, loved the story, hope you write more stories soon, and the flamers are just bitter because- well... do THEY have any awards for their stories??? Don't let them get you down. It is truly a magnificent story.

I began reading the 1st 18 chapters on another site until I read the A.N. describing the change from being an S/K story about adventure/friendship to a romantic version with a lemon being added but only being posted on here. In Ch.19 when they were trying to kill the dragon & Sessh ended up with his face between her breasts, I couldn't stop laughing my head off at his thoughts. The story isn't heavy on comedy and I was so caught off guard when I read this part that I burst into laughter while drinking my coffee & for the 1st time in over 30 years I laughed so hard that my drink came out of my nose.

I don't even know where to start. I know its been years since you wrote this, maybe you won't get to read this now and even though its irritating to write this from my phone I'll do my best! Lol... Wow, seriously. You know I read this years ago when I was about, what 14? Maybe, maybe I reviewed but I cannot remember. I'm 20 now but I reread because when I was 14 I didn't like sad stories and when I began to read this it gave my soul that... Sad sort of tug. Now, I enjoy these type of stories! If that makes sense, anyway! I'm glad I reread this... This is the best story I think I've read in fanfiction, in all categories. Seriously this was just out of this world! Man I don't even know how to explain properly... Ahh I felt like crying, I laughed, I frowned! Lol I'm sad to have finished it and wished I readsslower! Ahh *hug* I actually love you lol you could make so much money from writing! I want to say so much but like I said I don't even really know how to word it. The plot was so exciting so alive, you made a new story out of THE story, Inuyasha itself. You actually made Inuyasha BETTER! I mean damn the twists the turns you have some sick imagination! (Sick as in goooooood ok lol) so so so so good I'd love to watch a movie of this loool I'm not joking! But yeah you should be so proud, best story I've ever read!! Annnd yeah I just don't know how to explain! Love love love heart heart ahhh I'm so sad I've finished reading it was so daaamn gooood! I love u! *bows* :) thank u so much

I love this story. I love that I can pick it up again after years and still feel all of the emotions that this story evokes. If it was in a paperback the book would be worn with love. I don't know if you ever look at the reviews anymore, but I wanted to say Thanks for Writing... and thank you for reviewing my stories a long time ago (I have backups of the reviews from the stories I pulled, and was happy to find you there!)

Hopefully you aren't letting all that talent and hardwork fall away ;) If you ever have any published works let me know! I'd be glad to read from your imagination again.

Happy Writing Resmiranda, hope all is well.

this story breaks my heart in the very best way! so well written-and realistic as much as it can be
the way sesshoumaru was reluctant to ever say he loved her-but clearly did *tears up*

my god the ust was so heavy it coated my skin! AHHHHHH

I thought I might as well review on this site too since this is the actual complete story. The story is not the same without the lemon, since you have no real resolution to the tension it just goes from point a to point c and you don't really get how that happened in the FF version, still both are amazing stories, this version is just better since it's the full vision, my review on FF was actually on this version, but can be taken for either I guess, keep up the awesome writing...

You're story was so WONDERFUL!! It made me laugh and cry. You are a truly talented writer. I could not stop reading, I felt like I was really part of the story. Thank You for the AMAZING read!

I joined the website just to tell you that this story is amazing. I am so surprised I didn't cry but the sad parts made the happy parts that much better. This is one of my favorite pairings of all time and this is also probably my favorite COMPLETED (super points for being finished and just as good as throughout at the end btw) FF ever. It was amazing almost every time I wanted something to happen in your story and it didn't was completely and inexorably justified because what you wrote was so much better. As I said the little bad parts and the pain made the good so much better, and I was smiling from ear-to-ear by the time I finished. You are my FF hero! Much Love!