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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great update
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll be waiting for your next update. Liking this story, it is one of the ones I always check to see if its updated. Good job of the Inu/Kagome self doubt/angst by the way. Can't have it to easy for them ne?
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! The plot is very interesting and the chapters are well written. I also like the way the focus shifts to the different characters, not stuck on the same ones all the time. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to the next chapter.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing chapter!! A lot of character depth. I really liked it.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your concept. You have a great writing style with a well thought out and interesting plot. The long chapters are a good thing and always flow well so please don't go out of your way to shorten them. Look forward to your next post. Thanx.
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!! Long chapters, a deep and complex storyline....it just gets better and better! I'll try to keep reviewing for you. I know it helps to know people not only read, but also take a few moments to leave comments. Awesome job!
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!! You've posted on aff.net!? Welcome to the hentai neighborhood ::cheesy grin::
Now, I must push YoukaiMusashi over for beating me to 1st reviewer status...but 2nd best isn't too bad, right? Sigh....well, Kagome keeps telling herself that (but we know that she's really not 2nd in Inu's heart, right?).
What is there NOT to gush over about your story? You've heard me say it many times over...but I think you do an EXCELLENT job of keeping the characters very consistent with the anime/manga considering that it's an AU. Wonderful balance of action, character development, humor, and angst! And the best part of your story is the plot! I mean, talk about original! I can't recall any other story - AU or otherwise - that takes the fight over the Shikon jewel and includes a battle over real estate into the storyline. Okay, that's a major oversimplification, but y'know what I'm saying.
Ahh....and I love your dominant Inu! Sigh. I just love Inu. And I love Inu-Kag even more. Your Kagome is one sassy chick, which isn't too different from the manga 'cept for her cussing now and then. But that is a very realistic transition to AU, ne?
Sigh....you're only on ch 4 here and there's so much fun stuff in store for everyone! Oodles and oodles of fun. I'm scared to let too much out of the bag with my review...
Now, I must push YoukaiMusashi over for beating me to 1st reviewer status...but 2nd best isn't too bad, right? Sigh....well, Kagome keeps telling herself that (but we know that she's really not 2nd in Inu's heart, right?).
What is there NOT to gush over about your story? You've heard me say it many times over...but I think you do an EXCELLENT job of keeping the characters very consistent with the anime/manga considering that it's an AU. Wonderful balance of action, character development, humor, and angst! And the best part of your story is the plot! I mean, talk about original! I can't recall any other story - AU or otherwise - that takes the fight over the Shikon jewel and includes a battle over real estate into the storyline. Okay, that's a major oversimplification, but y'know what I'm saying.
Ahh....and I love your dominant Inu! Sigh. I just love Inu. And I love Inu-Kag even more. Your Kagome is one sassy chick, which isn't too different from the manga 'cept for her cussing now and then. But that is a very realistic transition to AU, ne?
Sigh....you're only on ch 4 here and there's so much fun stuff in store for everyone! Oodles and oodles of fun. I'm scared to let too much out of the bag with my review...
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey There
Well I am sorry to say that I am lurker so I tend to read and not review, but if the story is expectionally good and or interesting I will, as is the case this time for I want you to continue to write it. I was actually surprised how much I am enjoying this story, your chapters aren't boring and you have a great knack for detail without going overboard. I know summaries are hard but to be honest your summary didn't give your story enough credit, it might just take a little while for people to find it but I
Well I am sorry to say that I am lurker so I tend to read and not review, but if the story is expectionally good and or interesting I will, as is the case this time for I want you to continue to write it. I was actually surprised how much I am enjoying this story, your chapters aren't boring and you have a great knack for detail without going overboard. I know summaries are hard but to be honest your summary didn't give your story enough credit, it might just take a little while for people to find it but I
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUED from previous review it cut me off
anyways as I was saying. I am sure once they find it they will love it so keep up the great writing and know that even though I may not review every chapter I am still here and will support you.
Till next time take care and keep up the good work
Hugs
TrinityKindred
anyways as I was saying. I am sure once they find it they will love it so keep up the great writing and know that even though I may not review every chapter I am still here and will support you.
Till next time take care and keep up the good work
Hugs
TrinityKindred
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty long. Don't get me wrong, I like your fic, but long reads are kinda hard. Just a suggestion that you shorten them but still have something significant happening in each chapter. ;)