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Worth the wait!

i love your story! so please update soon.

WOW...I mean...WOW... you're fic is amazing!!!! It's so original and you're one a hell of a writer.... YoukaiMusashi recomended this to me a couple of weeks ago and i'm glad i finally got time to read it.
I love the depth you gave the characters and how you include original parts form the manga and adapted them to your plot. That's what I loved the most about your story (apart form the fact tha it's just so damn AWESOME) I got hooked from the begining and cannot wait to read more (i already read ch 13 in ff.net...btw, poor kagura, she deserves to be happy...and finally when sango was about to confess her feeling they get interrupted arghhh).

Keep it up!
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HOLY CRAP!!!! I can't believe that happen. Oooo but great lemon, I enjoyed that!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!^_^

I really like this & am looking forward to the next chapter. Now on to the critique; chapter 12, you have wearily [as in tired] down several times & it doesn’t make sense in the context used, I think you meant to use warily but just got messed up. Also near the end when Sesshoumaru uses his sword you have it down as Tessaiga for most of it & Tensaiga only a few times. I hope this helps.

this great is update

Great chapter to a great story. But, which lemon are we waiting for? Inuyasha and Kagome, or Sesshomaru and Kagura? Seems we need two lemon chapters!!!

Keep up the good work!

this is great but is kinda wrong about rezoing laws but it might not be the same in japen they can't do that cause the shrine was there before the city was it called grandfarthung but if it had burn down maybe. there another way he could of done it but don't could your fanfic ROCKS AND IT'S GREAT AWAY UPDATE PLEASE

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I really like this fic. It's very interesting. I can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work.