rate_review Reviews

I just finished your story and I must say it was definitely one of the sexiest I've read. Keep up the good work. I like the way you portray Sesshomaru even if I still think he is a little off, it works perfectly in your story (else it would have been much too short right).
Thank you for letting us enjoy your hard work!

woooooooooooooooohoooooooooooo!!!! I love it!!!!!

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

Really enjoyed this story.. It was just great...

Just a hey how are ya. I haven't gotten that far into this story yet, but I think I've seen this a few times in your other story Violation of Honor...but I could be wrong. It's actually the most common mistake I see in writing.

Lose and Loose

My pants are way too loose since I've lost so much weight. I have to get a belt or something so I don't lose them.
Man that's a loose woman! She didn't lose her viginity, she gave it away half price!

Many people spell lose like loose. I blame the govenment...and the enlish language.

Awesome story. Enjoyed it very much.

Like always you outdue yourself. Really how do you do it? i love reading your fics... I dont mind reading them over and over again.

good luck
love to read more of your work

I was recommended this story by one of my favorites, Demonlordlover, and I am certainly glad I took the time. This was a very hot story but also very thoughtful. I like the way Sesshomaru is obsessed about Kagome as a human with the following demonic side-effects coming along afterwards. He accepted her and all her faults to begin with. Well isn't that what real love is all about....ACCEPTANCE. Something we all search for. I got very absorbed in your love scenes, so much more than just sex. While I'm not against just sex by any means, I also like lots of tenderness and caring and foreplay. You are quite quite touching and soulful. I see the romance glowing in you. I've just started House of Lemons and I am blown away but I will review that on that site. You are great and added to my list.

That was goooooood. I guess Sesshy lika to fuka. CONTINUE!

And what a shocking case of obsession! Sensational! Action scene Wonderful! I must say, I got very sad when Koga is killed in any story, but I'll live through this. I can see why you are recommended, I am glad I've read this story, and now looking to read more. Great storytelling. Peace!