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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly ermmm opportunistic of Youko. ROFL, poor girl can't get any privacy. Another great chapter. Glad to see that Kag is going to be good buddies with Kurama. Hmm makes me wonder how close the two of them will get before she becomes involved with Hiei ;-) Can't wait to see what happens, update soon please.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi! Thats quite the first chapter you have going there! You BETTER keep writing, or you'll have many rabid fans after you pretty soon thats for sure! All kidding aside though, you have some great plot lines going right from the start and I can't wait to see what happens and how things progress into a romance between those two cuties from YYH. Hoping for an update on this as well as your other story would be too much to ask I guess, but pleeeeeease hurry!!! :) Beautiful ideas! Keep at it and I'll give you a cookie...
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. If all else fails in picking a pairing you could always do a threesome between H/K/K if you think you can do 1, some people can & others can't & make it believable so since I have no idea how you feel about them, etc.... The Kag/Kur pairing would be interesting though since Kurama has already 'met' Kagome, his confusion at her being alive, etc would be interesting.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, this chapter is good. I can only hope that there are more chapters soon to follow. I personly am burt out on Kag/Kur fics and like the challenge of kag/Hiei. However, if Kag/Hiei isn't going to flow with the muse, i'll take what I can get. Thanks.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg a wonderfull start to another wonderfull fic by you, and if your taking votes??? I myself have a sweet spot for Hiei too, I think he and Kagome would make a wonderfull pair, I dont know I just think Kurama is not suited to Kagome, hes to sweet and controlled, if that makes sense, I think Kagome needs a litttle friction to make life interesting for her, and seeing her and Hiei glare or growl at each other would be cool, anyhow hope you update soon cause I like this first chapter, but I also love Sins of the Father as well, totally kick ass fic that one, cant wwait for more...anyhow till laters be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great fanfic. It takes a lot to get my attention to continue reading when there are updates. I usually don't review, but I figured I would this time. If you can't decide on the pairings you could do a three way pairing, if you wanted of course. Hiei/Kagome/Kurama I hope you update again soon. Ja!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far, great first chapter. Can't wait to see where you go with it. I'll keep my fingers crossed for a Kag/Kur pairing though either are equally good. Hope you update soon, keep up the good work
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hiei i would like to see one in which Kurama plays a more brother like role