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for The Guardian

by whirleeq

person Jasmine Fields
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was definitely a great transition that I think, is a beautiful way to
make the crossover less agitating to read through! Very well done. Oh yeh,
and update soon!!!!

-Jazz-
person kiara703
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like your story so far. can't wait to see what happens next. will be interesting to find out if she ends up with kurama though.
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Hope you update again soon^_^!!!
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry forgot to vote^_^*! Well I love Hiei/Kagome and Kurama/Kagome/Hiei too. So if your not doing 3somes then I vote for Hiei/Kagome. Buuut if your are then I vote for Kurama/Kagome/Hiei^_^!!
person Ralina
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story and I love the concept that you came up with for it. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

~Ralina~
person Diane
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it & am really looking forward to the next chapter. I'd like to see either Kag/Kur since they already have some 'history' together or a threesome between Kag/Kur/Hiei if you think you can do a threesome justice, but since it's your fic do whatever you want to, I'll read it either way.
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I gotta admit I know almost next to nothing about YYH but THIS IS GREAT!!!!! I love how playful you made Kurma and naughty too it was great:) Please remember to include physical discriptions of the charaters as I don't know people by name but I've seen like 4 episodes (but missed the one last week where they indroduced Kurma and Hei grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr) I've got a fague understanding of what they look like but back story and physical features mentioned along with emotional discriptions will help me picture this better^_^
person sesshysgirl08
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! sooooooo good!!! i love it!!! its awsome!!! o man this is sososososososososososososososososososososososososososososososososososososososososo amazing!!! LOVE IT!!! please update soon!!! -sesshysgirl08-
person Mija
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!...soo glad its going to be a Hiei/Kags pairing, as wonderfull as this chap was I was certain that you had decided on a Kurama Kags pairing and although I would of still loved it and read it, I really like the Hiei Kags pairing better, I think Hiei would admire the scar Kagome will have as a badge of her battle with Naraku, Hiei seems like that, looks dont seem to phase him much me thinks, he likes spirit and fire, spunk and a challenge, a fight so to speak, and him being a fierce warrior, I think his woman having a scar from a famous battle would make him admire her more, anyhow great chap I soo loved it as I love your other fic as well...till next chapter be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
person Richelle
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...so far! I like how you made the personalities of the characters...

By the by....I think you should make it a Kurama/Kagome story. I think it’ll just fit...

Please Keep writing!!!!!