rate_review Reviews

Chap. 2 = Good chapter. Kagome's blushing a lot in this story. A little absent minded too (she forgot to heal herself). ^^;;; You made Kurama forward though. I think that he'd seduce rather than pounce. But how are you going to have Kagome fall in love with Hiei? This should be good...

Umm... why is Kikyo travelling with the group? I thought that with the battle being over and all, she'd go her way and meet back up with Inuyasha-tachi when they were ready to make the wish (though I guessing she knew they're planning on making it now).

Well, I hope there will be more conflict in this story (and not just the romantic kind). There'll be an enemy, right? One more powerful/cunning than Naraku? I hope so. All right, I'll keep reading. Hope Kagome meets the detectives in the next few chapters. That should be entertaining.

Q: Why do you call Kikyo Kagome's 'former incarnation'? An incarnation IS the soul's former life. She's not dead, therefore she should only be her incarnation. Just putting it out there...

Two more things: 1)'No' in Japanese is 'Iie', not 'Aie' and 2) there are faulty hyperlinks throughtout your story (about 5 in the second chapter alone). They're double underlined and loop right back to the beginning of this chapter. Very strange...

Ok, I'm done.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

Hi!I love your story so far!Gotta go Bye!

A Very Very Very good story!!! I love kag/hiei parings. I wonder how the first actual meeting of Kagome, Hiei and Kurama goes, especially with Youko having met her before. I'm getting very excited. I can't wait for the next chapter to be updated. So PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Great fic so far. Hope you update soon. To bad Kuwabara doesnt know about Yukina and Hiei being siblings. Its going to make his life a bit shorter. Anyways update soon i cant wait to read more.

Tease! No, wait, tormentor! All this going on and soooo close to an encounter, but no! Seriously though, like everyone else, I think this is a great story. It is very easy to read, being well written, and you certainly know how to keep your readers hooked. More please!

Very good chapter, Hiei was perfect. Although I'm surprised he didn't strangle Kuwabara with his bare hands lol Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens when they all meet.

Ahh this was great very entertaining I LOVED that you gave Hiei a sweet tooth that's just so CUTE!!!! *smothers Hiei in a bossom choke hold* this was a great and very funny chapter but I'm afraid I'm not sorry about the delay as it will hopeful mean a new chapter in your 'sins' story;) The whole thing where he kept reaching for his katana and it not being their was freaking heliarious this was a great set up chapter and I also liked the buffy style mini crossbow ^_^

Please oh Please let this be a kag/kur/hiei fic i rally wanna read this like that pairing

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

This is a great cross-over so far! You managed to make a plausible story between my two favorite shows. Keep it up!