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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hi! great story keep it up!



KELLI!!

nice start i hope you can add sbout two pages per fic though. but so far so good keep up the good work k ^_^

good lol but u need more detail- and by the way maru-chan is so goddamn hot **cries** why cant i have him? WHYYYY???? **sesshomaru falls out of sky** YAY! ok bu-bye i gotta go have my way with him now ^__^

Spectacular,but I wonder what Inuyasha has to do with it.

So Kagome being the very intreeged gurl(yes I know how to spell girl its just a habbit) she was she went over to him.

Frankly, if you DO know how to spell, that's not the sentence you should be putting that claim in. Aside from obviously thinking it would be cool to use "gurl" -which is a horrible crime against proper English on its own- you also say "intreeged" and "habbit." I'm taking a stab in the dark and guessing you meant "intrigued" and "habit."

As a word of advice. If you've heard it used, and THINK you know what it means, look it up. You obviously have access to the internet. Go to dictionary.com. Expound your vocabulary and spelling abilities. Maybe then you'll make the distinction between simply knowing that girl has an "i" in it, and knowing that writing girl with the correct use of said "i" is far more appealing to REAL adults.

Good so far keep up the good work

Awww...it's cute so far, you should write more on it.

This is good. who was that on the phone?

i love this story i hope that you update real soon i cant wait for the next chapter