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for Kagome's Betrayal

by ShatteredHearts

person sexykagome03
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...nice story!! ^___^ It's kinda cliché, but this is beautifully written. Please update soon!

SEXYKAGOME03 ^_~
person jackie lee
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it update plz
person jamie
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!
person lil_rocker_chick
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I lOVE THIS STORY. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person tora
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahg evil! lol! well very nice!
person Kat
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinky!!! I liked it!!! Write more!!!! :)
person sourgirl
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man don't you hate writer's block? lol anyway .. hope it goes away soon so you can write the next chapter! :DDD
person Nefra
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lots of kinky goodness in the next chapter huh? This is the first Kag/Nar I've seen in a while. So far it's excellent, I hope you're going to update soon.

Ja ne!

Nefra
person joey
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is still pretty interesting. Keep writing. So I guess the deal Kagome made includes Shippo, Kouga & co and Keade? You know they are still going to fight against him will that change things? I know it will all come out in the later chapters Update soon can't wait to read the lemon for Kag/Nar
person Tora
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooo good! i love it!