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for Kagome's Betrayal

by ShatteredHearts

person loslomo
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleasepleaseplease!, write more
person Li Yeung Chang
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you goin to pass that phase of writers-block and start writing the new chapters...i have been dyng to eagerly reads the next chapters of this story for MONTHS...would you please continue...you are leaving your readers very dissatisfied and dissappointment...we are tormented...please update soon... good-luck... sayonara ^.^
person a
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm this is one of the only none kagome inyuasha's that i like nice writing
person loslomo
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please continue
person SomewhatTired
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW YOUR STORY WAS AWESOME! WRITE MORE... (IM GOING TO PUT IT IN MY FAVORITES OK? THAT MEANS YOU SHOULD TAKE THE TIME TO WRITE A FEW MORE CHAPTERS)
person animechick
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tht's an interesting start keep going
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me here! Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person joey
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. So does Inuyasha's sword still transform? It only worked at first because he was protecting Kagome and she is human. Now that he is not protecting Kagome anymore and Kikyo isn't really aloive will it work? Just wondering it would be a great wake up call if it didn't. Anyway keep writing this is interesting.
person MistressKagopme4U
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
This is very good, i love it, please write more soon, please
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink-blink* Thud!!
Ohhs really liking this story.. Good job!
Ohh a sexily evil lusty Naraku!! Cannot wait to see more of this!!