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for The Wolf and The Dog

by miyu557

person kai
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya naraku's dead! and yes sessy/miroku play!! hehehe, if you do more on that, lemon please!! XDDD UPDATE SOON!!
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Why did Miroku feel up Sess of all ppl? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Sesshysfavhuman
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a hell of a chapter it had everything in it And it was long. I loved it I am glad Inu is back to his normal self and a full demon to boot. Miroku he is such a perv lol I really hope you do another story, and thank you for liking bitten Till next time L.J
person Rawben
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
only one more?? :( but it was such a good fic... lol, and i love the mir/sess thing... that's damn funny. ;) so, what's your next story going to be about? ;)
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!! INU IS ALIVEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs* thank you thank you! The pups helped mama to kill naraku! SUGOI!!!!!!!!!! Thank God Inu is back to his male form and he's now a FULL DEMON!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! what exactly happened????? Miroku just had to grope the ass huh? HEHEHEHE will he and sesshy end up together???? How odd.... LOOOOVE the chappy!! Update soon ^o^ Ja
person Excel
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We love it, we love it ^^ MORE pleace!

person Mindy
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading chapter 17 and read your flame. LOL I love this fic. I can honestly say I never thought I would be reading a male/male story. I was on Fanfiction and hit the wrong button and this came up. I started reading and found this to be one of the most original stories I have ever read.(I love Zelix's fics as well, and very original) The fact that you turned InuYasha female in this fic is just priceless. LOL Anywho about your flame, If I remember correctly, it is possible for a male to produce milk it just never secretes through to nipple. Although I could be wrong it certainly wouldn't be the first time or the last. As for being sexist I don't even know what sex you are so I can say nothing. But if males were able to produce milk in this fic it just wouldn't have worked. This fic took alot of imagination that I know for a fact I don't have. I love, love, love this fic. Oh and keep up your spunk. Nice to see that not all people take the flames to heart . You handled it great. Now if everyone would handle flames this well and just say "Shut the fuck up" we would have alot more stories. LOL
person maria
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok that is not rite. thats bad. u juz had 2 ruin it didnt u. but i mite 4give u if u fix it. great chapter though. update next chapter soon.
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn fucking cliff hangers. LOL ^_^ Can Inu's day get any worse, geesh, poor puppy. I hope he's not dead and if he is I hope Sess can bring him back. That sword of Sesshy's is soooo convenient, ne. Another really well written chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chappie ^_^
person miyu-chan
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell chapter, update soon?