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Actually, its Ryuu that means dragon. Not Ryu. Just thought you outgha know, cuz I missed that question on my Japanese final last year. ^_^

ok on according to me's review which i know was a long time ago but a guy can give off milk ive seen it on tv when i was watching animals planet most extrme somthing out guy animals and what they do and they put this thing on how this guy got his breast swalloned and he was giving off milk his wife was with him to so i agree with me(not me me but the other me damn this is confusing)

I don’t know if it is a blessing or a curse that this fiction was already completed when I bumped into it. I simply love the storyline & I’m not sure if I can survive for a moment while waiting for the next chapter.

Looking at your author profile, I realized there is a sequel to it. I’ll be reading that too as well as all the Inuyasha fiction you had wrote. I will be so busy for the next few days, or even weeks reading your fictions. Haha, not that I’m complaining.

Keep up the great work!!!

I will read the rest later. love it so far. please update. Domo Arigato.

Ja-ne

I hate that you had Inuyasha be refered to as a 'she' in the story! It recked the flow for me. :(

that was not bad at all some of the best writing i have seen so far though there was a lot of sex i do have to say that but i can see why though you have the art of wirting beautiful story and you should make another on perhaps on Miroku and Sesshomaru hmm would that make a good couple *giggle* anyway keep up the good work and dont let anything stop you

Your story is really good.^.^

Hmm. well, the first three chapters were good and al (because i just love angsty inuyasha) but i think u should've explored kouga's feelings a little bit more. cuz i mean, before he slept with inuyasha he was convinced he loved kagome, and now just because of one night with inuyasha he suddenly realizes he LOVES hiM??? i think that'/s a little bit sudden. *nods*he coudl've at least realized he CARED a little before the love thing u know. i think u should rewrite this part a little bit u know, and not throw in kouga-realizes-he-loves-inuyasha-because-he-slept-with-him-once. too OOC for my tastes. i would've thought kouga would think it was because of lust that he fucked inuyasha.

so yea. too rushed.

LOL. that was sweet! perfect ending.. ^_^


sorry it took me soooooooo ra damned long to review this last chapter for you. lol. you know i love it. ^___^ *goes off to read your sequel*

awesome story. i enjoyed reading and reviewing. it write another story. l8ers ^_~