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for The Wolf and The Dog

by miyu557

person Anon
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Kagome and the others are there. I'll be glad when Inu has the pups. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey for the new update, and yeah, it was a bit slow, but necessassassary. i can never spell that right. anyhow, i like inu's mood swings... poor kouga.
person Tiamat
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy this pair isnt that popular but for some reason your story dragged me into liking them :P Must be the MPREG I'm always a sucker for having the man give birth hehe.

Hehe okay the review part that all authors love and hate!
Actually I didnt find anything within the story that needed work, it would be nice to have the full story of what the baby is suppose to do but other then that your work is perfect. The sentences are flow together and doesnt leave the reader being blinded with choppy sentences. So keep up the good work and keep up the good story structor, its so nice finally reading a fanfic that has a story that flows and not choppy!
person ichie-chan
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you for reviewing my story! ^-^ i love your story! it's really good! plz update soon!
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe, Inu's being so cute and cuddly and Koga's being so sweet and supportive. They're so happy. But I doubt that will last for long, since Narakus looking for him. This is really a lot of fun to read. Thanks!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see Naraku still hasn't given up looking for Inu, the evil bastard. I'm so happy for Kouga and Inu, but why haven't Kagome and the others visited them yet? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww yaoi is love! ...and yasha is cute when he blushes!
person Tesgura
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. But you forgot to translate seme to top/dominant.
person Minako
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh! I loved it loved it loved it! It had such a cute ending! I really hope u write more InuxKoga fics. Your really good at it!
person Malefacent
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. More please!!!!!