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for The Wolf and The Dog

by miyu557

person nea
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm reviewing so you better write more! Anyway, I love how this fic is progressing. Did someone issue a challenge or something? There are Inu/Kouga rape and/or mpreg fics popping up all over the place. Not that I'm complaining, but it's a surprisingly large amount of fic popping up all at once. So, back to my review. I love how OOC Inu and Kouga are. And with Inuyasha's hormones stretching his emotions to different extremes make me love it even more. Who is going to save Inu? Would it be Sesshoumaru? I sure hope so. The more characters you have OOC the more I love it! Can't wait til you update again. Don't hold out on us too long!
person automailarm
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dances around* finally a fic where Inuyasha was the seme...HORRAYY!!! >:D<
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I loved it, but I can't believe you left us hanging there. Naraku better not hurt my puppy.
person yukiko
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
did he went into labor ? oh gush
person Sesshysfavhuman
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so mean to stop there. Inu is so hard headed now he is in labor and Naraku is there Kouga better get there soon oh i'm sitting on the edge of my chair. Another thing dont you hate it when people read your story and dont review it???? I do but please what ever you do dont stop writting this is such a good story
L.J
person shylust
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god poor inuyasha. I hope the pups will be ok and kouga will be able to find him. lol I am becoming obssesed with this fic. Update soon onegai. Keep up the good work.

Laura
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That stupid Inuyasha! Why did he leave the safety of the wolf's den? Now, he and the twins are in danger because of his stupidity, the dumbass!! I just Kouga can sense Inu's fear and get there in time along with the others to help. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person shylust
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this fic..onegai..update soon!!! I am dying to know whats gonna happen next :)
person BrokenDesire
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Inuyasha+Kouga fic I've ever read and I must say...it effin rocks. However, there is one little issue that is bothering me...you use the word "ministrations" and "fervor" like 20 times in this fic...it just gets kind of old T_T. I don't mean to flame...but yeah. Try looking up some synonyms :). Other than that, and the few spelling errors, I love your fic. The plot is great ^_^. Update soon!
person Sesshysfavhuman
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant remember if i reviewed on fan fiction or not so i am just goinna review here. You Know I love your story so much
I like how you make them so loveing towards each other. When are the pups going to be born???