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o.o *nosebleeds* shit, *grabs tissue* that was wonderful! that was your first lemon? WOW!!! cant wait to read the next chapter! how's 'yasha gonna react when he wakes up? 10000000000000/10

Actually I have heard of guys lactating before. But they CANT give birth...so far as I know.
Great story by the way. Aside from a few typo's and Minor spelling errors, you've done wonderfully!
Arigato!

weird start but ill give it a chance

you have got to continue and put Miro and Sesshy together. with a super hot lemon

Miyuki-san, I just wanted to let you, that I am a bit late on finishing this story. I had started to read about a year ago, but had forgotten about it when my computer's OS system crashed. I am glad that it is still here though, as I remember liking the story alot. I am glad I have the oprotunity to finish it. Normally I would wait until afer reading the story to review, but after reading your author's note for chapter 15 I just had to post. That person was righ, about men lacktating. It can happen. Men will offten take on the symtoms of their wives pregnacies while they are pregnaunt, and a few have even been known to suffer tenderness of the chest, and lactation. It has also been proven that a woman does not have to be a mother, or have just given birth to produce milk. A woman can produce milk, even if they have never had a child. The human body is an amazing ting, changing constantly, and addapting to it's environment. So yes, that person was right about being able to lacktate, but only a woman can give birth, and it is not a sexest thing to change your characters into a female to give birth, and provide food for their children. In that aspect that person was wrong. And you are right, you can do what ever you like with in your stories, that's what makes them yours.I look forward to reading more of your work, please continue to enjoy writting, even no one reviews, it is for the love the art that you should continue, not for the oppinions of others. Ja ne.

I did just read chapter 15. I love the story so far, now I must continue read

Hi! I really like your story-I stayed up so late last night reading it, and I was amazed! I love it-keep up the good work!

All I can say is WOW!!!!!!!! That was amazing!! I can't even begin to imagine how you can up with that plot, but it was excellent!! I really wish that there was a way to make this story into actual T.V. epsiodes because that would just blow my mind!! Wow!!!! Nice job, excellent, stupendous, BRAVO!!!!!!

i actually haven't read this story yet but i was very interested in it after having glanced over it. i just wanted to see what people had to say about it. though regardless i'll be reading it. i just spent the past 20 minutes copying the whole fic onto my laptop to read on my 7 hour train ride home for the holidays. it's nice to see someone taking one of this pairing seriously. i plan to review again when i'm done. ;-D

please write mooooooore! i loved it !!!