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for The Wolf and The Dog

by miyu557

person *CLASSIFIED*
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is extremely beautiful and sexy at the same time. It almost had me crying on how beautiful it is. I always wanted to write a story JUST LIKE THIS but I always ended up fucking it up. You, my good friend, did an outstanding job. If this were a book, it would be translated to every single language in the world and sold everywhere. I am extremely impressed and very pleased. Very good job!!!
person SnakeMistress
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. i usually only repsond to chapters when A) a story is threatened with incompletion or B) something in the story really struck in this case. struck me with its creativity. i loved it.and have never seen a turn quite like this one. i think only maybe,..one other time and even then it wasn't quite like this. but to put it simply i loved the twist it was a brilliant and not usually thought of idea and i can't wait to see what happens the next day and how all the kids react. not to mention what happens with naraku. please update this again soon. ja matte ne till then
person SnakeMistress
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmmmmmm. not kids. wolves -_- its late. sorry
person inumoon3
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely update! Which one of the chibis are the oldes? Well can Inu-chan like be turned back into a boy but still have boobs, so he can feed the children? I think that was very interesting, and hope to read more soon!
person ichie-chan
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow the whole thing with Inuyasha turning into a girl when he's pregnant is becoming popular. i like it though! this was a good chapter! hope you update when you can. i was just wondering if Sango and Kagome are going to be partners???? if not than it's okay i was just wondering??? guess i wonder a lot.
person Sesshysfavhuman
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Miroku will never change will he he is such a perv. LOL I love it, you did it you made inu a girl/woman Now i would ask is he going to stay that way or what is going to happen but i dont want to ruin it for anyone else. The kids sound so cute you mixed both Kouga and Inu in them so well Keep it up. By the way thanks for the review on my new story I didn't know how people would react to it.
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWWW!!! so cute. and.. interesting. i think inu should turn female from now on on the new moon. eh? fun fun! and that was a good solution to the mpreg problem. well done.
person Tiamat
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see the next chapter :P And you made the wait worth it hehe, I love the fact of Inuyasha turning into a female to give birth hehe, hope he doesnt find out Miroku was staring at him....hmmmm then again that could cause an intersting situation as Inuyasha tries to kill Miroku for being a pervert and Miroku trying to plead his case hehe. *gets dragged off the computer as shes still giggle over the thought*
person maria
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alrite ya updated. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person Dante
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, now that was a BIG surprise; really good job with this chapter. I had to go back and reread a few paragraphs to make sure I got it right. I guess the question on everyone's mind is whether this change is perminent or not, we'll just have to wait for the next chapter. *Dante sits quietly, staring at the computer screen* No rush or anything. ;P
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