rate_review Reviews

Awwww I was hoping for a sex scene for the last part of the last chapter

This Is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

I liked this story until now. it is beyond my realm of understanding why people want to write male pregnancy and then either turn the male into a female to give birth or have him suddenly develop another opening. I makes absolutely no sense to me that a male can get pregnant anally but has to have another 'female' opening to give birth. If he is made with the ability to conceive as a male he would be able to give birth that way. Changing this makes as little sense as a female needing another way to deliver. I am sorry but you just completely lost my interest in this fic.

First off, I would like to say that this was a killer story. I had so much fun reading it. I particularly like how unique it is.

I thought I should also point out that there are missing words from many of the sentences in this story. Way to many to list here. Also, it's called the A-spot not G-spot. A for anal orgasm. The G-spot is only in the Vagina.

That story was the most awesome story EVER!!! Would you please make a Sesshomaru and Miroku story because those are cool too!

...How the hell does this story pass for 'good'? Seriously? Every single character is OoC, there's too many OC's and the overall storyline has a 'been there, done that' feel when it comes to this ship.

Horrible story.

Great story. Thanks for sharing

You are a master of storytelling!!!! DOMO ARIGATOU GOZAIMASHITA for finishing this story!!

nice just really nice. (I'm not the most discriptive person in the world)

you should right a squeal or something about how shessmoru and miroku get together.