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for Koneko

by Elizabeth777

person Asher
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sad, and cute, they belong together, she can even out his coldness with her warmth.

Very well written and poetic, they may be Japanese but that doesn't mean you need to do your poems in that stlye, write as you always have, don't change styles for anyone, but yourself.
person Church
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how cute i love this man here are some opinions from my hippy and commi side (communist) Hippy- Ey der gal dis be a good story RIGHTEOUS Commi- Oi not bad for a bloody woman as urself. UPDATE PLZES
person BethPee
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was too sweet, it made me cry... but now, onwards to the next chapter!

yours...
person Cassie
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really loved this chapter almost as the other 2, it was so sweet that Sesshomaru read that poem to Koneko and he hugged her and kissed her and what she said and fell asleep. All I want to know is PLEASE WE NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER. I want to know what happens now with Koneko and Sesshomaru.
person jisAtsU_siLENcE
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wellz first i'll say your welcome =) .. hehe .. you deserve reviews ^^ ... another awesome chapter .. wow she got her memories back .. wahahaha!! but now she doesn't really want them does she and sesshomaru knows bout her .. dumDUMdum ... ohhh i can't wait .. i hope you update agian soon =) ^^ .. GREAT JOB!!
person Cassie
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A really nice and sad story I cried on the last part Sesshomaru needs to stop being so stubborn and told her how he felt and she wouldn't die with Naraku. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Really nice poem that Sesshomaru wrote, but still eh should have told her how he felt and she wouldn't have taken it the wrong way. Keep up the good work. Don't keep the fan waiting for chapter 2.
person jisAtsU_siLENcE
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh .. this sounds good =) ^^ .. i hope you update agian soon!! =)