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for Pool of Blood

by BigG500

person Anon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person BigG500
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Look all of you out there blasting at my story this is my first story like this so be a little more kind.
Oh and by the way I was extremely bored when I wrote it.
person haleygrace
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exactly how bored were you? if your going to write a suicide story the make it a couple of chapters long and have it have a plot or make some sort of sense PLEASE!!!
person 0_0
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude.
person brit
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh ok, first of all, that is horrible grammer. second of all, that story had absolutely no sign of thought out time. It made no sense to me and it had no real point to it. I am not trying to flame but i am suggesting that you try to think out your stories and use spell check once in a while.
person Amanda
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm hey keep trying maybe some day you'll get there.
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the F?
person Kure
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congrats, you've written something so akward and off chance, I understood it.