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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i hope u no ur not being very fair with this story i get all the way to an interesting part and u stop KEEP GOING for god sake xOxDemonicPrincessxOx
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh wow poor kagome! thats just terrible :-( but i really like your story :-D i really hope youll continue it! ill be waiting for your next update ;-)
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please for the love for all that is good finish this story or at least update chapter 8. It's a great story.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good update soon keep it up kk
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a sick way of leaving off on the chapter ....cliffhangers.... anyway please update soon and btw great fic
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, very good! I really liked how you set things up as AU, but they were still very plausible--everyone was still true to their characterization in the anime. Poor Inuyasha keeps getting overwhelmed with herbs, you'd think he'd have realized by now he should just take them away from her...although it's just his character not to realize it. The only thing I'm sad about is that this story isn't complete, and I'm never on aff.net, so I know I'm going to miss the updates! Oh, well, I'll try to stop by every so often. Either way, it's an awesome story and SO much appreciated (especially the research you put into it).
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Just thought I'd let you know that I am enjoying your story. I think it is well written with a well thought out plot. I did, however, find one mistake that you may or may not want to correct. Normally, I don't mention things like spelling in my reviews, but this one really stood out for me because I know it is not the word you meant to use. The word was "bowel," which I noticed you used a couple times in this last chapter (2), when you meant to write "bowl." A simple mistake of a single letter, but when the meanings of each word are brought to light, it is hard to not mention it; "bowl" an 'open container used to hold food or liquids,' and "bowel" a 'section of the intestines,' and a common use of the word would be in the term "bowel movement." There is also another meaning and pronunciation of "bowel," which is 'the deepest and innermost part of something' as in the "bowels of a ship," but this also isn't the word you meant.
It is not a glaring error, and it will not stop me from continuing to read your story. It is just something I, personally, could not help noticing since I'm currently working as a substitute teacher at a nursery and preschool. So, everytime I saw the word "bowel" in this last chapter, I kept thinking of "bowel movement," which I'm sure is not what you were trying to portray when you were writing of Kagome stirring herbs in a bowl.
Well, that's all I wanted to say. Keep up the great work. Now, I'm off to read the next chapter. ^_^
Just thought I'd let you know that I am enjoying your story. I think it is well written with a well thought out plot. I did, however, find one mistake that you may or may not want to correct. Normally, I don't mention things like spelling in my reviews, but this one really stood out for me because I know it is not the word you meant to use. The word was "bowel," which I noticed you used a couple times in this last chapter (2), when you meant to write "bowl." A simple mistake of a single letter, but when the meanings of each word are brought to light, it is hard to not mention it; "bowl" an 'open container used to hold food or liquids,' and "bowel" a 'section of the intestines,' and a common use of the word would be in the term "bowel movement." There is also another meaning and pronunciation of "bowel," which is 'the deepest and innermost part of something' as in the "bowels of a ship," but this also isn't the word you meant.
It is not a glaring error, and it will not stop me from continuing to read your story. It is just something I, personally, could not help noticing since I'm currently working as a substitute teacher at a nursery and preschool. So, everytime I saw the word "bowel" in this last chapter, I kept thinking of "bowel movement," which I'm sure is not what you were trying to portray when you were writing of Kagome stirring herbs in a bowl.
Well, that's all I wanted to say. Keep up the great work. Now, I'm off to read the next chapter. ^_^
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! please update soon, keep up the fantastic work ^_^
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon! I want to know what happens!! This is a very unique idea for an Inu/Kag fic! Im presonally impressed! Keep up the good work! You are an excellent writer!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderful. You keep Inuyasha in character so well. I like the ending. Kagome is caught! HeHeHeHeHeHe! Well, keep writing and I'll keep reading. Love, peace, and chicken grease.